Tyelkormo the Fair
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Chapter 1: The Hunter Or The Prey
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Tyelkormo was stuck for good, even though it took him a good half an hour to admit it to himself. He felt like crying.
When he had first stepped foot in the woods for the annual competitions his master held, this wasn't how he had pictured things to lead to. Not at all.
Tyelkormo wasn't supposed to lose. He was the best, everyone knew it. He was supposed to hunt the largest game and slay it in the honor of his lord, and get the crown of antlers. The crown of the winner.
And he would have, if it wasn't for this stupid snare!
You're the stupid one, running ahead like a giddy elfling to retrieve your prize, not even sparing a second to make sure there were no traps. Fool of a novice…
His mind supplied unhelpfully and the tension caused by anger left his body, leaving him swaying, hung by the rope as the gentle wind of Manwë grazed the leaves and rocked him slowly. He would have fallen sleep if his foot didn't feel like it was going to fall off or the rush of blood towards his head didn't have him at the verge of getting sick.
All in all, the day was just getting better and better.
The one mercy he had been offered was the blindfold covering his eyes, he mused with irony.
If he didn't have it, the swaying motion of his body would have had him throw up on his own face, embarrassing himself even further. Not being able to look at the upside down world churning around him helped him to keep his nausea at a controllable level, and that was why the fabric covering his eyes was still held fast in its place.
Or maybe, the smallest of hope alive in his heart that he might actually win. Taking off the blindfold meant he had given up, and he would be damned before it. He was no son of his father if he did it.
His head turned towards the game he had shot down even though he could not see it, some of the damage brought to his pride lessening as he remembered just what monster he had brought down. He could swear it was almost three hundred pounds, and a head taller than Maitimo, even. Although his brother would not appreciate him using his tall figure as a measurement for stags.
The disapproving look he'd receive from his mother and the thought of the annoyed expression of Maitimo made him giggle out loud, the fact that he was being hung three feet above the ground and his numb ankle forgotten momentarily.
And it made him miss the approaching presence until it was all but a foot away from him, facing his front.
He gasped and his hand went to his dagger immediately, or where it should have been if he hadn't dropped it when he had tried to cut the ropes.
Who were they? Not a threat, surely. Oromë would keep them safe.
Not a threat to his life, but his chance to win, then.
His heart dropped and his face sobered up. Whichever one of his classmates it was, he knew they'd not be honorable enough to miss on the chance of taking his game for their own. As much skill as Oromë could teach them, most of them seemed to not really understand the point of his lessons. None but a few, and Tyelkormo was proud to say he could be counted as one of them.
His voice was cold when he spoke next, words pouring out of his mouth without a thought as he trembled slightly in anger and frustration.
"Go on, then. Take it and leave. The crown is waiting for the champion."
The stress on the last word made it clear just what he thought about someone else seizing his own hunt.
The stranger remained silent ere he spoke and for a while after it, and Tyelkormo could feel the weight of their gaze. When they did speak, though, he could hear the smile in their tone.
"I'm here for a prey of my own. Those of others do not concern me."
The voice was clearly female, but Tyelkormo could not for the life of him recognize it from any he had heard before.
Yet…yet it was familiar, as if he had known it forever, and it calmed him so as his arms fell on his side once more, no longer in a defensive position.
She had disarmed him in a blink of an eye, and Tyelkormo was fine with it.
Small steps were taken towards him. The huntress was exposed already. She cared not to sneak around. It was pointless.
His voice was calm despite his turbulent thoughts, his heart at peace even though his mind raced restlessly.
"What is that you hunt?"
A wave of hot air hit his face when she leaned down so that they were face to face.
She was too close, for comfort or anything else besides. He had to do something, keep her away, yet his arms felt numb much like his foot caught in the snare and for a moment, it was as if someone else had taken control of his body, ruling it in his stead.
And he did not mind it as he should have.
Small hand cupped his cheek and a thumb grazed his upper lip. It was just then when he realized his mouth was hanging open all that time.
The melodious voice spoke next to his ear, and the single word she uttered sent shivers down his spine.
"You."
And before he could decipher it, his lips were captured in a searing kiss.
His mind blanked and he gasped in what could be weakly considered to be surprise. In Tyelkormo's humble opinion, there wasn't any word in the Quenyan vocabulary suitable to describe what he was feeling at that moment. His father and brother might disagree and then Tyelkormo would argue and point out how neither of them were ever kissed by a strange nĂs, hanging a few feet above ground after getting caught in a snare.
Absentmindedly, Tyelkormo realized that the other hand of the huntress was cupping the back of his head, likely to stop him from moving away.
She had no reason to fear such. Perhaps his weak attempts of kissing her back wasn't enough to tell her he wasn't going anywhere.
They parted after what felt like hours to breathe, both gasping desperately for air.
Her hand fell from the back of his head, and he missed the warmth of it already.
The hand on his cheek left him also, and he had to stop himself from sighing in disappointment.
What was wrong with him?
Who was it that strung him along like a puppet for her own amusement?
Tyelkormo had to know, even if it meant he would be eliminated from the competition.
He raised a weak arm, meant to snatch away the fabric from his eyes.
An arrow whistle and before he knew it, he was on the ground, groaning at the awkward position he had fallen with.
It took more than a few seconds to compose himself and when he did, he sensed her there still, standing a step behind him. If she felt amused seeing his struggles, she was good at hiding it.
This time, his hand crept up towards his face more slowly, meant to catch her off her guard.
His huntress had yet to be bested though, for before he could even touch the blindfold, a dainty though strong hand circled around his wrist, stopping it midair.
"Don't."
His arm fell, head tilting towards the source of the command not unlike one of his own hounds.
She left him again, standing up.
Small steps were taken from him and not long was it before he could no longer hear the faint sound of her soft boots grazing the ground and like a she-wolf, she fled as silently as she had snuck up on him.
Tyelkormo wondered to himself after willing his numb muscles to move that this was how it felt like to be hunted.
(Link to the discussion thread)
Tyelkormo was stuck for good, even though it took him a good half an hour to admit it to himself. He felt like crying.
When he had first stepped foot in the woods for the annual competitions his master held, this wasn't how he had pictured things to lead to. Not at all.
Tyelkormo wasn't supposed to lose. He was the best, everyone knew it. He was supposed to hunt the largest game and slay it in the honor of his lord, and get the crown of antlers. The crown of the winner.
And he would have, if it wasn't for this stupid snare!
You're the stupid one, running ahead like a giddy elfling to retrieve your prize, not even sparing a second to make sure there were no traps. Fool of a novice…
His mind supplied unhelpfully and the tension caused by anger left his body, leaving him swaying, hung by the rope as the gentle wind of Manwë grazed the leaves and rocked him slowly. He would have fallen sleep if his foot didn't feel like it was going to fall off or the rush of blood towards his head didn't have him at the verge of getting sick.
All in all, the day was just getting better and better.
The one mercy he had been offered was the blindfold covering his eyes, he mused with irony.
If he didn't have it, the swaying motion of his body would have had him throw up on his own face, embarrassing himself even further. Not being able to look at the upside down world churning around him helped him to keep his nausea at a controllable level, and that was why the fabric covering his eyes was still held fast in its place.
Or maybe, the smallest of hope alive in his heart that he might actually win. Taking off the blindfold meant he had given up, and he would be damned before it. He was no son of his father if he did it.
His head turned towards the game he had shot down even though he could not see it, some of the damage brought to his pride lessening as he remembered just what monster he had brought down. He could swear it was almost three hundred pounds, and a head taller than Maitimo, even. Although his brother would not appreciate him using his tall figure as a measurement for stags.
The disapproving look he'd receive from his mother and the thought of the annoyed expression of Maitimo made him giggle out loud, the fact that he was being hung three feet above the ground and his numb ankle forgotten momentarily.
And it made him miss the approaching presence until it was all but a foot away from him, facing his front.
He gasped and his hand went to his dagger immediately, or where it should have been if he hadn't dropped it when he had tried to cut the ropes.
Who were they? Not a threat, surely. Oromë would keep them safe.
Not a threat to his life, but his chance to win, then.
His heart dropped and his face sobered up. Whichever one of his classmates it was, he knew they'd not be honorable enough to miss on the chance of taking his game for their own. As much skill as Oromë could teach them, most of them seemed to not really understand the point of his lessons. None but a few, and Tyelkormo was proud to say he could be counted as one of them.
His voice was cold when he spoke next, words pouring out of his mouth without a thought as he trembled slightly in anger and frustration.
"Go on, then. Take it and leave. The crown is waiting for the champion."
The stress on the last word made it clear just what he thought about someone else seizing his own hunt.
The stranger remained silent ere he spoke and for a while after it, and Tyelkormo could feel the weight of their gaze. When they did speak, though, he could hear the smile in their tone.
"I'm here for a prey of my own. Those of others do not concern me."
The voice was clearly female, but Tyelkormo could not for the life of him recognize it from any he had heard before.
Yet…yet it was familiar, as if he had known it forever, and it calmed him so as his arms fell on his side once more, no longer in a defensive position.
She had disarmed him in a blink of an eye, and Tyelkormo was fine with it.
Small steps were taken towards him. The huntress was exposed already. She cared not to sneak around. It was pointless.
His voice was calm despite his turbulent thoughts, his heart at peace even though his mind raced restlessly.
"What is that you hunt?"
A wave of hot air hit his face when she leaned down so that they were face to face.
She was too close, for comfort or anything else besides. He had to do something, keep her away, yet his arms felt numb much like his foot caught in the snare and for a moment, it was as if someone else had taken control of his body, ruling it in his stead.
And he did not mind it as he should have.
Small hand cupped his cheek and a thumb grazed his upper lip. It was just then when he realized his mouth was hanging open all that time.
The melodious voice spoke next to his ear, and the single word she uttered sent shivers down his spine.
"You."
And before he could decipher it, his lips were captured in a searing kiss.
His mind blanked and he gasped in what could be weakly considered to be surprise. In Tyelkormo's humble opinion, there wasn't any word in the Quenyan vocabulary suitable to describe what he was feeling at that moment. His father and brother might disagree and then Tyelkormo would argue and point out how neither of them were ever kissed by a strange nĂs, hanging a few feet above ground after getting caught in a snare.
Absentmindedly, Tyelkormo realized that the other hand of the huntress was cupping the back of his head, likely to stop him from moving away.
She had no reason to fear such. Perhaps his weak attempts of kissing her back wasn't enough to tell her he wasn't going anywhere.
They parted after what felt like hours to breathe, both gasping desperately for air.
Her hand fell from the back of his head, and he missed the warmth of it already.
The hand on his cheek left him also, and he had to stop himself from sighing in disappointment.
What was wrong with him?
Who was it that strung him along like a puppet for her own amusement?
Tyelkormo had to know, even if it meant he would be eliminated from the competition.
He raised a weak arm, meant to snatch away the fabric from his eyes.
An arrow whistle and before he knew it, he was on the ground, groaning at the awkward position he had fallen with.
It took more than a few seconds to compose himself and when he did, he sensed her there still, standing a step behind him. If she felt amused seeing his struggles, she was good at hiding it.
This time, his hand crept up towards his face more slowly, meant to catch her off her guard.
His huntress had yet to be bested though, for before he could even touch the blindfold, a dainty though strong hand circled around his wrist, stopping it midair.
"Don't."
His arm fell, head tilting towards the source of the command not unlike one of his own hounds.
She left him again, standing up.
Small steps were taken from him and not long was it before he could no longer hear the faint sound of her soft boots grazing the ground and like a she-wolf, she fled as silently as she had snuck up on him.
Tyelkormo wondered to himself after willing his numb muscles to move that this was how it felt like to be hunted.
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