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What are some things that J.R.R Tolkien did wrong in his writings?

As it happens, while looking through Letters for another post, I came across this:
Letter 144, to Naomi Mitchison
 
Hmm... Personally, I find it quite the opposite, I think that Tolkien adds lots of detail, usually to a level that makes it enjoyable to read, but not overwhelming (in most cases!).
I meant more in the sense of physical descriptions of characters, at least certain ones. Legolas, for instance.
 
There's also the battle of Gil-galad and Elendil vs. Sauron. Just a maddening lack of detail there.
Hmm, I've never really thought about this one much. I thought it had enough detail on its own, but perhaps that's just because I don't remember it too well, as it wasn't one of the scenes the really stuck out to me. Which parts do you think could have had more detail?
 

There's hardly any description given of the battle that I've seen. Here's one such description by Elrond at the Council of Elrond:

From "Of the Rings of Power and the Third Age" in The Silmarillion:
 

Yes, that was also in "The Council of Elrond", read from Isildur's scroll:
The Ring misseth, maybe, the heat of Sauron’s hand, which was black and yet burned like fire, and so Gil-galad was destroyed
 
Well 'running rampant' and 'luring unwary travellers to their doom' are both fairly poor outcomes if you're supposed to be ruling a domain aren't they? It seems purely accidental that he manages to save the hobbits from OMW, which doesn't lead me to believe that he is in any way competent.

The hobbits actually do know the Old Forest:
'Oh yes they do!' said Merry. 'The Brandybucks go in - occasionally when the fit takes them. We have a private entrance. Frodo went in once, long ago. I have been in several times.' ('A Conspiracy Unmasked')
There's no reason to think that the Tooks especially wouldn't know Maggot fairly well, which makes this all the more puzzling.

I don't see Beorn as an enigma at all. He is a minor character who plays a small but important part in the story. Much like Bombadil. So where is all the literature about Beorn to sit alongside the Bombadil books?

Spirit of the River? River Goddess? Mermaid? My point is that she sticks out like a sore thumb in the world of ME, as does Bombadil. You say this is intentional on Tolkien's part; if this is correct, then I see it as a really big mistake on his part - I just can't understand why an author would bring in a character who so obviously doesn't belong to the narrative.

Whatever the films do have no consequences for the books. They are fanfic writ large. Enjoy them, or don't enjoy them; nothing in the films can affect what has been written in the books in any way.

I'd say that the first point in the nonentity definition describes Bombadil perfectly; he is around for an enormously long time yet does more or less the same as Beorn who is around for the blink of an eye relatively speaking. That complete imbalance speaks volumes.
 
Thank you for phrasing this better than I could have.
 
Competent? At what? Saving the odd unwary traveler? Like that's his job or something? 🤨

I stand corrected. Evidently, no hobbit ever went as deep into the Forest as our heroic quartet do.

As I said, perhaps 'disparity' is a better word. Or 'anomaly'. His skin-changing ability does not fit within the legendarium. I have never seen any books written about Tom Bombadil, though.

Are we really second-guessing Tolkien? How would you have handled this particular juncture in the story? I'm honestly curious to know. Would you have just eliminated him altogether, as well as the Barrow-downs, as Peej did and Ralph Bakshi before him?

Whatever the films do have no consequences for the books. They are fanfic writ large. Enjoy them, or don't enjoy them;
So, it's okay for one medium to do something but not okay for another. Seems to me like an arbitrary line to draw.

nothing in the films can affect what has been written in the books in any way.
That's not really related to the point I was making.

I eagerly await the first such volume, and your explanation regarding this supposed "imbalance". Overall, I think you're overthinking Tom.
 
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