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What are you writing about now?

Hmm. . . then I suppose it is high fantasy?
Quite a step back here, as these posts are coming fast.
Ent's response: "Perhaps." One can maybe sort it out by doing a search "fantasy vs. high fantasy" and the Net will be happy to produce much for consumption.
It has several legs, like Shelob. Since you have all the details in your head, you might want to do a 'comparative analysis' to see which of her legs fit on your plate.
 
Yes. Yes, it is. That's why I was excited and invested enough to drop everything and start writing it. 😂
Well I'll be waiting for it definitely!
You kind of remind me of one of my friends,she also had this poetic side that got all of us waiting for her to read her homework for our writing classes
Her family wasn't really supportive of her following the career of an author or poet so she couldn't flourish her talent outside of school which there wasn't much opportunity for her to become successful,but I hope you never have to put it aside like she did!
 
@Ent Ah, thank you, Ent. I might do that. However I suppose it doesn't matter much right now, whether it is high fantasy or low. Besides, as I complete more of it, I can share portions of it, and you may be able to distinguish for yourselves.

@Aredhel Ar-Feiniel , Aw, that is very sweet of you. I should have it completed by the end of the week, at least I hope so. That's sad. I'm sorry that she had to give it up. My only support for my writing is online. A few people I know IRL appreciate parts of my poetry, but no one would even consider the idea of myself taking poetry and writing as a career, sadly, much as I might want to.

@Fingon_Findekano , Ah, good! It looks as though I have quite a few people interested in it. That's great. Obviously, there's no way to know that the sons of Feanor would have lamented for him, but I think it would have been hard for them to not have. He was their father after all, and if they'd swear an oath for him, you'd think that they might at least have something to say when he died.
 
Here's a couple of projects I dabble at a little from time to time.

The Journal of the Whills – This is an ongoing project that I re-visit and dabble with. There’s been a cheap printed version, but I’ve started adding stuff again. It is not meant to be a declaration of dislike for the Star Wars prequel, but a non-hostile acknowledgement of how people have different ideas.

The Journal of the Whills started partly from the idea that George Lucas acknowledged that he has his own SW canon, the tie-in SW books and comic books are a different canon, and every fan also has their own internal SW canon. Also, that other writers took inspiration from SW. A major example is the writer of the comic series Saga, Brian K. Vaughan, took the attitude of rather than get frustrated when Star Wars goes in storytelling directions that aren’t the way we hope, he channeled that potential disappointment into writing out his own idea of the way he thought Star Wars would go.

My own project, The Journal of the Whills, is at heart an attempt to excavate my own memories of what I thought the Clone Wars and general backstory would be like when I was a child. I had vague memories and images that Obi-Wan’s hints and outlining of historical events; what he described created images in my mind. And even though I like aspects of the prequel Star Wars movies, I felt like there would be good value in writing down the visions that I had in my head from watching the original movies.

This covers ground such as an alternative way that the Empire emerges from galactic politics and warfare, the reign of a couple of Emperors who usurp each other, the career of Anakin Skywalker and Obi-Wan Kenobi, alternative circumstances in which they first meet, a different shape to the Jedi religion and it’s organization. It also details how there were a couple of wars; in the sense that there was the First Clone War, and a Second and Third. And Anakin and Obi-Wan fought in the Second and Third.

Because it tries to capture a child’s image of how I thought the backstory era would be like, it has a child’s logic. So things such as the passage of time being different in other parts of the Galaxy duplicate the effect that Vader’s career as an Imperial enforcer means that he has had a busy life that encompasses more years of work than the years of Luke’s life growing up on a farm (it is born from the logic that as kids we think our parents and grandparents are much older than we actually are, and also that the original actor playing Darth Vader/Anakin Skywalker is older than we might have expected. I liked the idea that time passes slowly on a boring planet like Tatooine (it takes forever to grow up) while time passes more rapidly on busy city/urban planets, where more work is needed to maintain a Imperial occupational presence.

Also, since the SW galaxy has slightly different physical laws, there is sound in space and you can survive in space with an oxygen mask (see Han and Leia go outside the Millennium Falcon into a cave that we might expect to be exposed to vacuum in our own galaxy. My logic is that Star Wars is a science-fantasy or space-fantasy setting; pulpy and with fuzzy logic.

Narnia Streaming-series bible/treatment. This is a test of my creativity to adapting the Narnia books to a hypothetical streaming series; based on a friend and other fan’s stating that it can’t be done. I wanted to see what I could do in terms of developing a backstory and cosmology from the books that would serves as a springboard for expanding a narrative that the Narnia books contain. I did a little research into Jewish mythology, to try and outline a hidden history that places children from Earth as Sons and Daughters of Adam and Eve in opposition to a dynasty that descends from Lilith. The backstory hints about where the Garden of Eden might and might not be, how the lineage of Lilith ends up on different worlds, the role of Atlantis as a realm that might have had access to the other worlds. Also how the dynasties of Lilith intersect and diverge with that of giants. This led to ideas of what kind of long-game mischief The White Witch got up to between The Magician’s Nephew and TL, TW, and TW; and how she inserted herself into the laws of the Stone Table, which isn’t touched on in The Magician’s Nephew and something I felt could be a separate incident in the intervening time.

Once I settled on a backstory, I outlined the episodic breakdown of the Narnia books. The present-day focus starts with TL, TW, and TW; but with a more engaged and aware version of Diggory Kirk. The idea is that the adaptation of TL, TW, and TW would be expanded by extensive flashbacks of The Magician’s Nephew. So the flashbacks would kind of adapt The Magicians Nephew in flashback form, in tandem with TL, TW, and TW. This resulted in the idea of expanded Diggory’s role, he starts off as a mentor figure, but we get a sense that he has more adventures that the original books show; have him involved in the incident where The Witch ritually insinuates herself into the laws of the Stone Table.

This led to the idea of having Professor Kirke re-enter Narnia and de-age into childhood. His guilt over his involvement with bringing the Witch to Narnia is a motivation for helping the Pevensies to understand Narnia a bit better.

Then I thought this hypothetical series could transition from the end of TLTWaTW into the Pevensies reign, and cover the events of The Horse and His Boy, but with the Pevensies’s side of events made larger.

Then of course, the Pevensies go home, and deal with the psychology of returning to their younger age. A couple episodes of how they struggle with that transition, which I thought I could connect thematically with Narnia’s history after the Pevensie’s mysteriously disappear. Maybe a joined theme of losing a sense of direction, or feeling oppressed (the children having to accept being children under adult authority; while Narnia struggles with a Golden Age abruptly transitioning to being an occupied country).

Vignettes – This is hard to explain. A couple of circumstance-images sprang up in my mind, three different ones; two of greater substance. One is about a man who dwells in peace in a home in the eye of a perpetual storm. Perhaps this character will take on a larger role in other works of fiction I might write. The other is about a being who manifests into existence, and my mind is mulling over the different things he does in the primordial environment he finds himself in; and the raw power of creation he has access to. The second vignette seems like a version of a creation story; I’m not sure where it will go. The remaining, less substantial vignette I haven’t even written down because it’s just so insane and defies any kind of consistent setting logic; it’s more of a metaphor for my feelings about certain life circumstances.
 
It's all your faults... Ent had to change his original post from 5 to 6 items.
He's had a flash of realization, and knows the "Elasser" segment needs to be a 2 book set..

"Elessar: Architect of the Fourth Age" then "After Elessar: The Age of Man." The first being of course the foundation launching the 2nd.

And all the events, dates, etc. of "Peregrin Took: My Part of the Road" must be carefully coordinated with "Elessar: Architect...." as they are happening simultaneously.

"Peregrin" will contain shadowings of what will be revealed fully in "Elessar: Architect...." of course.... so there can be no disconnect in dates, events, etc. between any of these 3 works.

My, my... this web becomes ever denser as its threads reveal themselves....

But this is all for LATER.... LATER.... we must get the first two done... discipline, Ent.. Discipline..!!!
 
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Here's a couple of projects I dabble at a little from time to time.
Very ambitious with some solid pondering in play..!! Sounds like a bit of 'pushing the boundaries' involved as well... excellent.
In what way can this "TTF Writer's Club" help you progress?
 
Very ambitious with some solid pondering in play..!! Sounds like a bit of 'pushing the boundaries' involved as well... excellent.
In what way can this "TTF Writer's Club" help you progress?
Very good question! I was so excited about the first part of the topic post, I was more focused on sharing my projects; and am excited to sit down later and look over what other people have shared and comment on those posts. I didn't even register the second half of the OP's proposed parameters.

Write now I'm juggling a lot of reading, in addition to managing general life stuff. When I say dabble, it really is dabble writing. The major thing I want to do The Journal of the Whills is re-type it, so I can print copies (and updated drafts with the new material I've been adding). The next major step with that particular project is gauging to what extent I can change and adapt it from a work of outline-form fan fiction into something that could serve as backstory for more original storytelling.

A major writing struggle for me is transitioning from outline form into zoomed-in scene-for-scene storytelling. I might be making it even more challenging by the fact that my current backburner slow reads, Le Morte D'Arthur and re-read of The Silmarillion, feel a bit like they are telling stories in the zoomed-out, outlining mode. For a few years I was focused on outlining stories, and then crashed into this wall: "I've already outlined the story...but in a sense, I've already told the story. Why would I want to re-tell the story when it's already been told?"

Weirdly enough, in contrast, one possible project I've pondered is dabbling in writing Arthuriana. Le Morte D'Arthur seems like a fantastic wellspring of expandable storytelling. I latched onto the story of Sir Gareth, and how he completes his quest to save a lady and her kingdom from a tyrannical opposing knight. And then the lady tells him to swan off and prove himself! So Gareth goes off with major depression, and the lady, Lyonesse has what looks like panic-y second thoughts. So Gareth goes journeying and adventuring under a cloud of depression, while Lyonesse sends her brother knight out to hunt for him, and her sister Lynette is able to help the hunt with some truly frightening sorcerous skills.

I liked the idea of re-telling the continuation after Sir Gareth has seemingly accomplished one of his major works of heroism, right from the start. But re-purpose it so a reader unfamiliar with the story will have elements to puzzle over, mysteries to enjoy figuring out. Why is Gareth being hunted? They seem like nefarious forces that are after him, but are they, and how far do they go to find Gareth? Why is Gareth depressed? And I thought, since Arthuriana is great because it's mutable, I thought I would tell Gareth's story from a modern perspective of what is emotionally healthy; so he's initially depressed for a day or two, but he should have a good perspective on life (and broadly, the character seems to be someone who takes initiative and is able to handle emotional abuse from other characters). I thought it would be interesting to see Sir Gareth actually move on from his ambition to love and marry Lyonesse, not mope. So he continues to have adventures, and meets someone new. And now there's a conflict, because he was able to move on and find someone else; which complicates the motivations of Lynette and her hunters, the brother knight and her sorcerer sister Lynette.

Thinking about this is curious. I like the idea of expanding someone elses work, exploring different directions a fiction might take, but I guess I am less enamored of revisiting writing that I've already done. I haven't actually thought about that, to say nothing of where I might be inclined to be inconsistent with what I've written in this post.

At a basic level, I really like this topic as a place to share our writing projects.
 
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