Aren't we a talkative little bunch?
I read through the chapter and took many notes, so hopefully I'll be able to spark some interesting conversation concerning this rather remarkable work.
First of all, by reading through some of the versions of stories and notes that
Tolkien has, I can't help but wish that the public had
all the notes to go from. I know, it wouldn't be very easy to acquire. But it is tempting to think about.
My notes consist largely of simple musings. I tried to find things in the chapter which are connected in some way to later writings.
I find it interesting how, even this early, Tolkien had a conception of Earendel. He is pictured as a wayfarer who sailed to find Kor, and any man (and that man's decendants) who is born under his beam becomes a wanderer as well. So even at this point in time Tolkien had the conception of Earendel sailing to Kor (
Aman) in
Vingilot, but with a little different twist. Earendel's story both shrinks and grows from this version in the version that we have in
The Silmarillion. The same can be said of Tol Eressea, though that island's significance becomes changed quite a bit. I enjoy following these changes through to their conclusion a lot.
And at this he wondered more than before, seeing the size of the cottage; but he that opened to him, perceiving his mind, said: 'Small is the dwelling, but smaller still are they that dwell here -- for all who enter must be very small indeed, or of their own good wish become as very little folk even as they stand upon the threshold.'
This part is confusing to me. It doesn't seem to me like it's a metion of the fading because fading isn't "smaller." The house is actually represented as being smaller in scale than usual houses. Could the smallness here be a possible allusion to humbleness? Could all who enter The Cottage of Lost play have to leave their pride behind and become "small?"
Yet all whom we send return not and that is great grief to us, for it is by no means out of small love that the Eldar held children from Kor, but rather of thought for the homes of
Men; yet in the Great Lands, as you know well, there are fair
places and lovely regionss of much allurement, wherefor it is only for the great necessity that we adventure any of the children that are with us.
...and for pity the Eldar sought to guide all who came down that lane into the cottage and the garden, lest they strayed into Kor and become enamoured of the glory of
Valinor....
So the
Elves first try to keep Men from becoming enamoured of Valinor, but when they do become enamoured of it, they try to hinder them from wanting to go back where they came from. Does this make any sense?
"...It was the ringing of this Gong on the Shadowy Seas that awoke the Sleeper in the Tower of Pearl that stands far out to west in the Twilit Isles."
I would dearly like to know what Lindo is talking about here.
I find it interesting that there are both children and adults at the tables during dinner. Are these adults Elves? Or are they the children of Men who long ago hear the singing of the Elves and got caught in Kor? Are there different
ages because of the different times that the children stayed in Kor? At this point in the mythology, it is obvious that Tolkien was allowing Men to be able to stay in Valinor . . . but only if they remained there until the Faring Forth. It seems that men are allowed to visit the Heavenly Elven lands, and they may even join the Elves in their mortality by drinking Limpe.
The Elves are pictured throughout this entire chapter as more angel-like and faerie-like than Tolkien later described. What made him change this? Tolkien later moved the two kindreds closer and made them both "kindreds" instead of having one be so extremely different from the other.
The use of magic is also incredibly different from what Tolkien used in later writings. He has a "Magic Sun," a "magic fire," "magic shores," and "good magic." In his later writings Tolkien seems to draw away from this magical element and make the Elves more substantial and material. This was a good thing, IMO, though I'd like to see his thought process behind it.
Valwe --
Manwe. It seems possible that
Manwe as the name of
Vaire's father was a mere slip.
Here among those many came my father Valwe who went with Noldorin to find the Gnomes, and the father of Vaire my wife, Tulkastor.
Errr . . . error?
Now, about the poems. I personally like Tolkien's first version
You & Me and the Cottage of Lost Play better than I do his last and final edition. I like the thoughts in it better because it seems more distant and dream-like than the later one. I did like
The Trees of Kortirion in its final form, but didn't like it as well as
The Cottage.
And finally:
Tall the were, fair-skinned and grey-eyed, and their
locks were dark, save in the golden house of Finrod . . .
PJ really needed to listen to this!
Now, speak amongst yourselves.