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Thoughts on translation. "Son of the Sunlit Swordsman"

Thanks for bringing in the Quenya side — I appreciate those citations. They help a lot with seeing where √MAK originally carried the “sword-man / cut / hew” force across the Eldarin branches. I just want to explain why I’m handling the Sindarin form carefully. Quenya and Sindarin both come from Common Eldarin, but Tolkien sometimes lets the two languages carry the same root forward in different ways over time.

So while Quenya makar gives us the historical picture, the late Sindarin pages I’m leaning on show a bit of refinement: VT 45:32 has Tolkien delete “swordsman” and keep the broader “warrior,” PE17:147 uses megil as the functioning word for “sword,” and PE17:113 defines thorn specifically as “steadfast” in names rather than a role-word like fighter. On that same page, arben fills the role-title (“knight”), so the late pattern seems to be:

thorn = steadfast
arben = knight / warrior
megil = sword

That’s why I’m being cautious with using magor as a general late noun. I’m not downplaying its earlier presence at all, only noticing that Tolkien’s later adjustment separates the job-title from the weapon and reserves thorn for the name sense of “steadfast.”

Quenya forms are still very helpful for understanding the root history of √MAK; I’m just distinguishing that late Sindarin develops its own semantic choices from the same root system, so I don’t automatically carry the older Quenya sense forward without checking the later Sindarin layer. All good on my side, truly — I’m enjoying comparing how Tolkien reshapes things across different periods.
 
Backyard Professor said:
PE17:147 uses megil as the functioning word for “sword,”. . .
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PE17 also attests Menelvagor on page 120, where the name Telumehtar is noted: "Usually called in Sindarin Menelvagor (1, 91), Q. Menelmacar."

But again, even if it wasn't, it's in Fellowship, so no reservation at all for me. I'm even thinking of going with Magor Magorath the next time the End Times comes up, just to see if anyone notices.
 
Good catch, Menelvagor is attested, and yes Tolkien printed it in Fellowship. The key thing, though, is that Menelvagor is a name-element usage, not a free Sindarin vocabulary word.

Tolkien did this often: certain forms only appear in names, not in everyday speech. Menelvagor is one of those cases. It doesn’t automatically mean magor = swordsman in normal Sindarin sentences. It is a poetic star-name (“The Swordsman of the Sky”), not a lexicon entry. It shows his genius I think.

On the other hand, PE17:147 is Tolkien actually giving us the functioning Sindarin word for “sword,” which is megil. That’s why I rely on PE17 for basic meaning: it shows what word Tolkien intended people to use in regular Sindarin, not just in mythic titles.

So you’re not wrong noting Menelvagor, and Tolkien clearly liked dramatic compounds in star-names. The caution is just not turning a poetic name-piece into a standard dictionary noun when Tolkien himself didn’t present it that way. On the other hand, you seem to be having some fun with it, and I like it!

In short:
Menelvagor = a proper name form.
megil = the normal Sindarin noun “sword.”

That's a fun way to play with Magor, even though Tolkien used that sort of form mainly in epic names, not everyday language.
 
Backyard Professor said:
The caution is just not turning a poetic name-piece into a standard dictionary noun when Tolkien himself didn’t present it that way.
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Do you have any positive evidence that the word magor was not used outside of poetic names? The fact that we do not have examples of such a usage in late texts is not a proof, given that it was neither explicitly rejected as a normal word for “swordsman”, nor replaced with any other word meaning “swordsman”, and its Quenya cognate still appears in late texts as a word for “swordsman”, as shown above. And even if it is dubious, what is the alternative? The word megilthor proposed by you earlier is unattested and does not make sense as a generic word for “swordsman” (meaning “steasfast sword” at best, and even then most probably requiring -thorn rather than -thor as its final element), so I could not possibly prefer it to the attested magor.
For what it is worth, what you rely on here is “Quenya Notes” from 1957 (see editorial comments on PE17/145). Earlier you seemed to say that you relied on a document from the late 1960s and imply that such elements as -thor and megilthor are attested there, and you still have not clarified what that document was. I am beginning to suspect that you might have learned the Elvish languages using the method of A.A. Lowdham.
 
Thanks for the thoughtful reply. Let me clarify a couple of things, because I think we may be talking past each other.

The issue isn’t whether magor ever could function as a general word for swordsman, but how Tolkien actually treated it in the later linguistic phase. We both know the early material uses makar/magor broadly. The hesitation I raised is only about late Sindarin usage where Tolkien, in several texts, shifts role-words out of common speech and into name-registers.

Just to clarify one point you raised: when I referred to the later material, I wasn’t citing a specific unpublished 1960s source that contains megilthor as a standalone form. What I meant was that PE17 and the later VT material show Tolkien refining how certain forms operate — with megil appearing as the normal word for “sword,” and some heroic or older elements showing up primarily in names rather than in everyday vocabulary. If my wording earlier made that sound like I was pointing to a specific new attestation, that wasn’t the intention.

PE17:147 gives megil as the functioning Sindarin word for sword. That is why I pointed to it: Tolkien explicitly labels it as normal vocabulary, not title language. By contrast, several name-elements like thorn and, at times, thor appear restricted to names. This doesn’t prove magor cannot be used normally; it simply explains why some of us handle it cautiously in late Sindarin contexts.

I have no problem if someone prefers magor as a general swordsman term. My point was only that Tolkien’s later notes show a tendency to specialize certain heroic forms in names. That’s why I lean on megil when identifying the everyday word for sword.

I am not trying to eliminate the early tradition or deny cognate history. I am simply describing the late lexical narrowing that Tolkien occasionally performs. That is why I don’t treat a poetic element as a guaranteed dictionary noun without clear late usage.

I appreciate your patience with the clarification. I’m simply trying to read Tolkien the way he himself began reorganizing vocabulary in his later years. You can see that shift beginning in the early VT issues and continuing through the later volumes (40–50), where Tolkien refines earlier concepts and delineates which forms serve everyday speech versus elevated name-style. My aim isn’t to dismiss the earlier phase but to follow the way Tolkien himself reshaped it.

And yes, I caught the Lowdham joke. Fair enough. I promise I’m staying on the textual side of things. Happy to stay in the manuscripts. I’m only quoting what Tolkien left on paper.
 
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Backyard Professor said:
I am simply describing the late lexical narrowing that Tolkien occasionally performs. That is why I don’t treat a poetic element as a guaranteed dictionary noun without clear late usage.
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I get that, but I'm not sure we necessarily have a poetic element only for names in the first place,
and Tolkien himself, at least in certain instances, does note when a word is poetic, or usually found in names. See RUS- in Etymologies for examples of both, which I know is an early-ish source, but all I'm attempting to illustrate here is again, that Tolkien does, at least sometimes, note this sort of thing.

That said, I realize none of this is going to stand in place for a specific, late attestation of magor as a word in a sentence, but as I said at the outset, I'm no expert, although I did check around, and even Hammond and Scull appear to treat magor as a word, noting that Arden Smith "meticulously read this book in draft and advised us on linguistic matters." [The Lord of the Rings, A Reader's Companion]

And actually, so far, I can't find a web dictionary or book that doesn't, noting Parf Edhellen currently on the simpler name Magor: "Leader of the house of Marach when they passed into Beleriand (S/143), his name was translated “The Sword” on the genealogy charts of that house (WJ/234-5), and appears to be simply magor “swordsman” used as a name."

Again, I realize none of this is going to change your mind. It's not meant to. But as I took the time to check some of these sources, it was either post about it somewhere, or tell my wife about my findings, and she doesn't care, although I like to believe she does care, at least a little.

And I realize there's the option of me simply shutting up, but I had some time before Church.

And by the way, "we" have our
own entrance into the Narthex.

 
Thanks for taking the time to pull those sources — and your note about Tolkien explicitly marking poetic/name-only forms in certain root entries is well taken. That’s exactly why I’m careful with magor: we have cases where he clearly labels such limitations, and other cases where he doesn’t, which leaves us in a space where register becomes an inference rather than a hard rule. I’m not saying that magor cannot function as a normal noun, only that the late texts don’t give us clear usage in everyday Sindarin, while they do give us megil as a working vocabulary term. So rather than excluding magor, I’m simply handling it with caution in the absence of that later prose attestation.

And I completely understand the joy of digging up references nobody in the house wants to hear about — it’s half the fun of this hobby. And as far as you shutting up, Not at all — please don’t shut up. You clearly enjoy the philological chase, and that’s the lifeblood of Tolkien studies. I’m glad you posted it.
 
Well I certainly love Tolkien's nomenclature, and diving into it. I love the languages too, of course, but I very rarely try to form Elvish sentences, unless it's something that at least seems simple, like maybe: "The tree is golden" or something.

Aside (for some reason): and JRRT will have to forgive me for liking some of Eddison's nomenclature in The Worm Ouroboros, even if Paul Thomas is correct that certain names originated in Eddison's mind when he a young boy, and he could not, or would not, change them thirty years later when he wrote the stories down.

I mean Brandoch Daha for example! Maybe it's no Magor Dagorlind, but I still like it!
 
Me too! Me too! Mae govannen! Savo ’lass a lalaith! - Well met! Have joy and laughter.
 
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Backyard Professor said:
Me too! Me too! Mae govannen! Savo ’lass a lalaith! - Well met! Have joy and laughter.
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Thanks! But may I ask, as my memory is older than it was yesterday, where are you getting the word lalaith from, meaning "laughter"?

Lalaith (Lalaeth) is a name, as is Nen Lalaith. See the family tree in WJ for example, with Lalaeth, somewhere below the name Magor.

 
Sure thing — it comes straight from The Silmarillion. Lalaith is the name Turin’s sister was given, meaning “Laughter,” because she was always laughing and full of joy (Silmarillion, Narn i Chîn Húrin section if I remember correctly, it's also actually in the appendix p. 407. Now that's in the Del Rey 2nd edition. Some editions have their pagination differently. I confess, I bought the cheapo paperback - lol). Her father later calls her by her Sindarin personal name Urwen, but the nickname Lalaith is explicitly glossed by Tolkien as “Laughter.” It’s one of those little gems tucked into the tragedy of that tale.
 
That was just a joke 'cause you used lalaith as a word

And with seemingly no humility, I'll say I've known who Lalaith/Lalaeth is, and what her name means, since 1977 - although as that was a long time ago, let's rather say I knew these things before my last post.

 
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Mae lavo, mellon nîn — Lalaith ú-chebin aníron!
If you want a little Tolkien symmetry to go with her name — notice how the tale gives Lalaith (“Laughter”) to the beginning of the story, and Nienor (“Mourning”) to the end. It’s a quiet inversion Tolkien builds into the tragedy of Húrin’s line: joy first, grief last.
 
Amalcarin said:
Sorry, but what was this phrase intended to mean? I can only read it as “Lick well, my friend – Laughter I do not keep I desire!”
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Mae govannen again!


No worries — I was just having a bit of fun with a light Sindarin exchange.
It wasn’t meant as a formal attested quotation, just a friendly “all good, my friend — laughter shared.”
I’ll unpack it later if you like, but no need right now.
Just banter, not a lexical thesis.


Lalaith na le still! 😊
 
No worries at all — it was never offered as a formal attested Sindarin sentence, just a friendly, light Neo-Sindarin greeting stitched together from familiar elements. Think of it as the Elvish equivalent of playful banter rather than a grammatical exercise.

If you ever want to workshop syntax together in a calmer thread, I’m always happy to compare notes — that kind of thing is fun for me. But this one wasn’t meant to carry that weight. Just a “cheers” in Elf-dress. 😊
Elvish syntax is one of those things where half the fun is comparing approaches, especially since Tolkien kept revising it. So I’m always open to digging into specifics when the moment’s right.
 
Is there another word for laughter in Elvish vs. the name Lalaith? (I do know Lalwendë is the laughing maiden, but again, it is a name.)
 
Glorfindel Goldtress said:
Is there another word for laughter in Elvish vs. the name Lalaith? (I do know Lalwendë is the laughing maiden, but again, it is a name.)
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Only in Early Qenya and Gnomish (if you are asking specifically about the noun – otherwise see this verb and its cognates). But I do not think lalaith is problematic because it is only attested in a name, and I do not think Elthir thinks so. I believe he was merely pointing out the strangeness of the fact that Backyard Professor used a word only attested in a name while arguing that another word (with no attested alternatives, too) was dubious for that very reason.
 
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Glorfindel Goldtress said:
Is there another word for laughter in Elvish vs. the name Lalaith? (I do know Lalwendë is the laughing maiden, but again, it is a name.)
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Good question — and there’s no contradiction once we separate the two categories.

Lalaith is the glossed meaning of a personal name given directly by Tolkien in narrative prose (“Laughter”). Using it as a semantic reference is entirely straightforward, the same way we use Tinúviel to understand “nightingale.” Name glosses come from Tolkien himself as part of the storytelling.

Magor, on the other hand, is a lexical role-word whose status in late Sindarin is less clear because Tolkien sometimes moved older role-forms (-dor, -thor, -magor, etc.) into poetic or name-only registers. That doesn’t make magor wrong — it just means we read it with attention to phase and register.

So the difference isn’t “this attested in a name vs. that attested in a name,” but whether Tolkien himself used the form as a name-gloss in narrative versus as a free-form common noun in late Sindarin vocabulary.

Both can be used — they just sit in different categories of evidence.
 
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