Tar-Elenion
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Originally posted by aragil
Of course, I'd argue that Shagrat and Snaga (or the Orc formerly referred to as a snaga) are speaking Black Speech (BS-ing, as it were), and that Sam 'understands' what they are saying in the same way that he 'understands' the conversation of Gorbag and Shagrat. But I'm not going to argue too much here, because I don't feel that Tolkien is constrained to type exactly what Sam heard.
As Tar-Elenion pointed out, Westron had a much more intuitive (at least for us Westerners) way of 'pluralacizing' (don't know the correct word here)Uruk: Urukin.
Yes. App. A notes the race of Uruks appeard ca 2475. Saruman 'took' Isengard in 2953 (though he had been dwelling there as warden since 2759) and 'soon' started sending out spies and agents. Saruman's Uruks start apearing ca. 2995. Saruman first turns traitor to the White Council by 'allying' with Sauron in ca. 3000. But he has been 'acting against' (withholding things) the Council from as late as 2939 and possibly even earlier. I will reasearch some more and see if I can tie anything done. It might be interesting to discuss when he first started his 'breeding' experiments.Originally posted by aragil
This is certainly correct for my theory- Saruman's Orc/human hybrids used Sauron's older Uruk strain, as well as some sort of men (maybe Dunlendings?). I'd be surprised if Shagrat's theory was the reverse, but I'll let him speak for himself. I just think that Uruks appeared in TA 2475, long before Saruman was in Isengard, or had displayed any truly 'evil' tendencies.
No problem. Just wanted to clarify.Sorry if I inferred you were telling Greenwood to give up his argument.
Again, no problem. I have been getting a little confused with all the 'half goblin orc men' things and just wanted to clarify my theory.Sorry if I was attributing the wrong hybrid to your 'orc-men' theory.
I think this is similar to Shagrat's theory.Even with Goblin-faced men, my point still holds. Goblin-faced men sound like men with goblin blood (and faces), not goblin with men's blood. Goblin-faced seems to be an adjective describing men, in English. Of course, I don't think that BS needs to follow the same rule, so my theory of Uruk-hai as 'Orc-men' is actually meant to apply to the creatures Tolkien refers to as 'men-Orcs'. Anyway, as I've said before, I think that Saruman produced a continuum of hybrids, ranging from the barely-orcish (but still noticeably Goblin-featured) Southerner at Bree, to the barely-human (but still large and sun-tolerant) Ugluk. I think that Tolkien has broadly classified this continuum into 'men-orcs' and 'orc-men', intending these two classes to contain all manner of orc/men hybrids, including his Uruk-hai.
Originally posted by Tar-Elenion
I think this is similar to Shagrat's theory.
I think the 'goblin-faced men' were more man like than orc like as well, I just think the 'Southerners' type were even less 'orclike' and may have been the 'treacherous and vile' and not the 'large and cunning', if you get my drift. But I think yours is just as valid.
Originally posted by Tar-Elenion
I dont think that was my suggestion. My suggestion has been that the 'Men-orcs large and cunning' are the 'goblin-faced Men' that Merry spoke of at Isengard, while the 'Orc-men treacherous and vile' are those like the 'Southerner' (though the variety of terms does get confusing). Shagrat has a different theory.
Originally posted by ShagratU
On the issue of what Shagrat means by using "Snaga", I suspect that a lesser orc assigned to an Uruk garrison would be known as "Snaga" beyond the conscious derogatory sense. I doubt that the Uruks (such as Shagrat) had anything else to call him; I can't imagine that they knew his real name (if he had one).
Originally posted by ShagratU
"Finally, there is a cogent point, though horrible to relate. It became clear in that time that undoubted Men could under the domination of Morgoth or his agents in a few generations be reduced almost to the Orc-level of mind and habits; and then they would or could be made to mate with Orcs, producing new breeds, often larger and more cunning."
Note that this decription refers to new breeds of Orc; Men would not become larger or more cunning through an infusion of Orc-blood.
Originally posted by Tar-Elenion
I can't imagine they even cared.
Originally posted by Tar-Elenion
Snaga is somewhat equivocal about his status. While he refers to Shagrats swine as 'ours', he also seems to draw a distinction by saying "I've fought for the Tower against those stinking Morgul rats...", which seems to imply that he was not really part of the Tower. If you get my drift.
Originally posted by Tar-Elenion
As an aside I have been rereading some of the old threads at the 'Inklings'. I was very entertained by the 'Strength in Arms' thread with my referring to posts as 'utter rubbish' and you calling them 'sheer nonsence' (or words to that effect).
Or Uruk-hai, as it were. But I seem to agree with ShagratU completely here. And I was even going to say that bit about men not becoming larger and more cunning by crossing with Orcs. Honest.Originally Posted by ShagratU
The "Men-orcs" are described in exactly the same terms: "Men-orcs large and cunning". That, along with the designation, "Men-orcs", seems to make it clear that these creatures are classed as Orcs rather than Men. The only candidates for this creature are thus Saruman's Uruks.
Well, for a while on this thread that was the case. I just sat here stating that 'hai' was probably 'men', so Olog-hai were troll men. What was my evidence? Well, when Sauron concentrates on them, the Olog-hai can endure the sun. This is a most peculiar distinction among trolls, who generally seem to 'die' in quick fashion when confronted with sunlight. It seems to me that if Sauron concentrates on the other breeds of trolls, they will not be able to endure the sun. Because of this it seems to me that the Olog-hai have non-trollish blood in them, specifically some sort of genetic material which would make them more able to endure sunlight. This does not link Olog-hai to men, but it does not preclude them either. What else distinguishes this breed from other trolls? Well, they are described as 'strong, agile, fierce and cunning, but harder than stone.' Strong and harder than stone seem to be a given for trolls- I can't imagine a weak, soft troll. Fierce might be a characteristic of Trolls, but I tend to think of them as rather slow and ambivalent, rather than fierce. Agile and cunning strike me as decidedly un-trollish. I imagine trolls such as the Huggins', the Cave Troll of Fellowship, and the Mountain Trolls of Pelannor as being rather large and lumbering, not agile. The Hill-Trolls of the Morannon seem to be more beastlike- fierce and striding, but not cunning. They bellow, and roar like beasts. Again, agility and cunning do not link the Olog-hai with men, but men are decidedly sun-enduring, as well as being cunning and agile relative to more 'conventional' Trolls. So I was still insisting that the Olog-hai were troll men when I stumbled on the following passage by happy circumstance:Firstly, nothing links the Olog-hai to Men.
Given the disdain that the Isengarders show for the Whiteskins, it's highly unlikely that they are actually boasting of their Mannish origin!
Originally posted by aragil
In the index to HoME volume 8, the above creatures are found in the entry for trolls, specifically called 'half-trolls of Far Harad', and they appear in the narrative as "the Variags of Khand, and the black 'half-trolls' of Far Harad." So CT also refers to them as half-trolls, although his usage of the quotes makes this reference somewhat ambiguous.
Turning now back to the Olog-hai, we see in HoME v. 12, p. 80 the passage that Tar-Elenion uses to claim that Trolls can not breed with Orcs. This passage is most interesting because it was the only part of the discussion of Olog-hai which was later changed in the final printing. In the printed version of Appendix F he does not say that Orcs (and biologically equivalent Elves and Men) could not breed with Trolls. That was certainly an early idea of his, but it did not make it into his final draft. We cannot presume to know why Tolkien later omitted this portion of the passage, but there is the distinct possibility that he changed his mind on the subject.
Finally, we note when Tolkien added the reference to Olog-hai. Apparently he did this at the same time as when he added notes covering mumak, Variags, and Khand. These notes would have been in reasonably close proximity- mumak[.I], Variags and Khand appearing at the end of the 'men' section, a single page of Hobbits, (Ents?) followed by Orcs and Trolls. Again this is hardly definitive evidence, but it is definitely interesting to notice that Tolkien decides to mention the Olog-hai at the same time he decides to elucidate the nature of the Variags.
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The fact that Variag was added to the Appendix at the same time as the mysterious Olog-hai makes me inclined to believe that Tolkien was addressing some of the creatures from Pelannor which he decided needed further discussion- the mumakil, the Variags, and the Troll-men.
The 'trolls they were' passage I read as refuting the possibility that the trolls were just large.
Originally posted by aragil
The 'trolls they were' passage I read as refuting the possibility that the trolls were just large.
Originally posted by aragil
Tar Elenion- I'm unclear to your objection to my last paragraph. As I read it, F4 was a draft. Variag, Khand, and Mumak were added in this version of the draft. We do not see F3, but in F2 the 'troll and orc' section did not mention Olog-hai. It seems to me that CT says that the Olog-hai entry first appears in the F4 draft, which is also when Variag and Khand appear. Is a carbon of a draft considered different than the actual draft? I'm genuinely confused to this objection. All I am trying to say is that Tolkien was thinking about adding Olog-hai while he was also thinking about adding Variag. The Variags are only seen in the narrative with the 'half-trolls' of Far Harad. Maybe Tolkien was thinking about Variags and Olog-hai at the same time because he intended the 'half-trolls' to be the Olog-hai. This is certainly not definitive evidence that the two creatures were the same. I'm justing pointing out that 'half-trolls' and Variags were linked in the narrative, and as I read PoME, the Olog-hai and Variags were added to the appendix at the same time.
Originally posted by aragil
Well, for a while on this thread that was the case. I just sat here stating that 'hai' was probably 'men', so Olog-hai were troll men. What was my evidence? Well, when Sauron concentrates on them, the Olog-hai can endure the sun. This is a most peculiar distinction among trolls, who generally seem to 'die' in quick fashion when confronted with sunlight. It seems to me that if Sauron concentrates on the other breeds of trolls, they will not be able to endure the sun.
Originally posted by aragil
Because of this it seems to me that the Olog-hai have non-trollish blood in them, specifically some sort of genetic material which would make them more able to endure sunlight. This does not link Olog-hai to men, but it does not preclude them either.
Originally posted by aragil
What else distinguishes this breed from other trolls? Well, they are described as 'strong, agile, fierce and cunning, but harder than stone.' Strong and harder than stone seem to be a given for trolls- I can't imagine a weak, soft troll. Fierce might be a characteristic of Trolls, but I tend to think of them as rather slow and ambivalent, rather than fierce. Agile and cunning strike me as decidedly un-trollish. I imagine trolls such as the Huggins', the Cave Troll of Fellowship, and the Mountain Trolls of Pelannor as being rather large and lumbering, not agile. The Hill-Trolls of the Morannon seem to be more beastlike- fierce and striding, but not cunning. They bellow, and roar like beasts.
Originally posted by aragil
From RotK, The Battle of the Pelannor Fields. 'East rode the knights of Dol Amroth driving the enemy before them: troll-men and Variags and orcs that hated the sunlight.'
Here at last we appear to have my beloved troll-men, called as such, and clearly operating in the sunlight. Of course, nothing is perfect, and it was not long before Tar-Elenion pointed out the following passage:
From RotK, The Battle of the Pelannor Fields. 'He (the witch king) now was destroyed; but Gothmog the lieutenant of Morgul had flung them into the fray; Easterlings with axes, and Variags of Khand, Southrons in scarlet, and out of Far Harad black men like half-trolls with white eyes and red tongues.'
Well, once we have them as 'men like half-trolls', and once as 'troll-men', which is correct (or are they both correct)? Does the phrase 'like' mean that they are definitively not half-trolls? [snip]
Clearly it is not beyond the language of Tolkien to refer to real half-trolls as 'men like half-trolls'. I am not alone in my opinion, apparently. In the index to HoME volume 8, the above creatures are found in the entry for trolls, specifically called 'half-trolls of Far Harad', and they appear in the narrative as "the Variags of Khand, and the black 'half-trolls' of Far Harad." So CT also refers to them as half-trolls, although his usage of the quotes makes this reference somewhat ambiguous.
Originally posted by aragil
And finally, 'rambling and convoluted contributions' are the norm here.
Originally posted by aragil
This is slightly clearer, but I am still confused. By F4 being complete, do you mean it was the first version submitted to Haughton-Mifflin, subject only to 'compressing'? Or do you mean that it was completed on it's own, prior to the addition of Variag, and before the beginning of a possible F5 which was submitted to H-M?
In the published version, the 'Words of the Easterlings and Dunlendings' is at the end of the 'Languages of Men Section', before the ~1 page note on Hobbits. Following this is a section on Ents, and then we get the Orcs and Trolls (Black Speech) section. I don't know if the Ent and Hobbit sections were extant at the time of F4, so Variags might have been in relative proximity to Olog-hai, although this is less important than the issue of time-disparity between F4a and F4b.
I hope that CT begins publishing photocopies of his father's notes, so that I can glean more and speculate less.
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