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Uruks vs. Uruk-hai


I will have to disagree here. Sam can understand Shagrat and Gorbag because he is _wearing_ the Ring. When he overhears Shagrat and Snaga he is _not_ wearing the Ring. Shagrat and Snaga are different breeds and of different breeds used Westron for communication (see App. F). Many BS words were in widespread use among the Orcs.

As Tar-Elenion pointed out, Westron had a much more intuitive (at least for us Westerners) way of 'pluralacizing' (don't know the correct word here)Uruk: Urukin.

Please note that I should have asterisked (*) 'urukin'. Accept my apologies and and please think of it as '*urukin'. I am going to edit my original post to make it clear.


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Yes. App. A notes the race of Uruks appeard ca 2475. Saruman 'took' Isengard in 2953 (though he had been dwelling there as warden since 2759) and 'soon' started sending out spies and agents. Saruman's Uruks start apearing ca. 2995. Saruman first turns traitor to the White Council by 'allying' with Sauron in ca. 3000. But he has been 'acting against' (withholding things) the Council from as late as 2939 and possibly even earlier. I will reasearch some more and see if I can tie anything done. It might be interesting to discuss when he first started his 'breeding' experiments.
Sorry if I inferred you were telling Greenwood to give up his argument.
No problem. Just wanted to clarify.
Sorry if I was attributing the wrong hybrid to your 'orc-men' theory.
Again, no problem. I have been getting a little confused with all the 'half goblin orc men' things and just wanted to clarify my theory.
I think this is similar to Shagrat's theory.
I think the 'goblin-faced men' were more man like than orc like as well, I just think the 'Southerners' type were even less 'orclike' and may have been the 'treacherous and vile' and not the 'large and cunning', if you get my drift. But I think yours is just as valid.
 
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Yeah i think so to.
 

This must be correct - I'd forgotten that Sam was wearing the ring when he got the translation effect. What you say makes perfect sense.

On the issue of what Shagrat means by using "Snaga", I suspect that a lesser orc assigned to an Uruk garrison would be known as "Snaga" beyond the conscious derogatory sense. I doubt that the Uruks (such as Shagrat) had anything else to call him; I can't imagine that they knew his real name (if he had one).

In other words, I get the feeling that Shagrat is not consciously deriding Snaga when he uses the term, it's just the only name he had for "Snaga" (which of course arises from derision initially).
 

Indeed. I would point out that the "goblin-faced Men" are identified with the Southerner at Bree by Merry and by Aragorn.

Moreover,the half-orc ruffians in the Shire are indentified with both the Southerner and the "horrible" Men who trooped out of Isengard:

"When they reached The Green Dragon, the last house on the Hobbiton side, now lifeless and with broken windows, they were disturbed to see half a dozen large ill-favoured Men lounging against the inn-wall; they were squint-eyed and sallow-faced."
'Like that friend of Bill Ferny's at Bree,' said Sam.
'Like many that I saw at Isengard,' muttered Merry."

I think these quotes make it fairly clear that all of these Man-height creatures are the same sort of thing, albeit with variation in their degree of Orcishness.

Also, in Morgoth's ring, we have this passage just before the description of Saruman's "Men-Orcs" and "Orc-Men":

"Finally, there is a cogent point, though horrible to relate. It became clear in that time that undoubted Men could under the domination of Morgoth or his agents in a few generations be reduced almost to the Orc-level of mind and habits; and then they would or could be made to mate with Orcs, producing new breeds, often larger and more cunning."

Note that this decription refers to new breeds of Orc; Men would not become larger or more cunning through an infusion of Orc-blood.

The "Men-orcs" are described in exactly the same terms: "Men-orcs large and cunning". That, along with the designation, "Men-orcs", seems to make it clear that these creatures are classed as Orcs rather than Men. The only candidates for this creature are thus Saruman's Uruks.
 

I can't imagine they even cared.

Snaga is somewhat equivocal about his status. While he refers to Shagrats swine as 'ours', he also seems to draw a distinction by saying "I've fought for the Tower against those stinking Morgul rats...", which seems to imply that he was not really part of the Tower. If you get my drift.

As an aside I have been rereading some of the old threads at the 'Inklings'. I was very entertained by the 'Strength in Arms' thread with my referring to posts as 'utter rubbish' and you calling them 'sheer nonsence' (or words to that effect).
 
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True. This could be the source of Sauron's Uruk-hai. But this all before Saruman.


This seems quite likely.
 
I found another reference to Saruman and his Orcs. In an Author Note in the Palantir section of UT it says:
"The Council seems to have been unaware, since for many years Isengard had been closely gaurded, of what went on within its Ring. The use, and possibly special breeding, of Orcs was kept secret, and cannot have begun much before 2990 at the earliest. The Orc-troops seem never to have been used beyond the territory of Isengard before the attack on Rohan. Had the council known this they would, of course, at once realized that Saruman had becom evil."
Endnote 7, The Palantiri. The 'essay' dates from 1966 when JRRT was preparing the revised edition of LotR.
The narrative time reference is to 2953, when Saruman seized Isengard for his own after the last meeting of the White Council.
This could give us further reference as to when Saruman may have started his breeding programs (it is interesting to note that JRRT is referring (in 1966!) to the 'special breeding' of Orcs as a possibilty). By 2953 Saruman had been keeping Isengard closely gaurded for many years. This suggests he started laying the basis for his breeding program before 2953, and only started getting his completed results in 2990. This is about that time Saruman's Uruks first started going into Rohan, though it was not suspected that they were his for a long time (App. A).
 
Originally posted by Tar-Elenion


I can't imagine they even cared.

No, probably not!


Yes. The description of the soldier-orc with the tracker implies that all the rest of Shagrat's company were big Uruks.

I wonder whether the Snaga who was scouting for Ugluk and co. in Rohan was an Isengarder, or one of the Northerners who had been forced into the role.


Yes, that was quite an amusing thread! There's another one, called "Saruman's breeding programmes", in which I post utter rubbish as well (not having looked at the texts for years at that stage). Incidentally, in that thread, I also tried to make the same distinction between "Men-Orcs" and "Orc-Men" that you propose - but then abandoned that position as untenable !
 
Originally posted by Tar-Elenion
True. This could be the source of Sauron's Uruk-hai. But this all before Saruman.

But remember that this is stated to be the method that Saruman "rediscovered" "long afterwards in the Third Age".

Now, Sauron's Uruk-hai had been around for a few centuries when Saruman bred his, but the "rediscovered","long afterwards in the Third Age" and the mention of "Morgoth or his agents" imply very strongly that this was something that had been done in the First Age, and not just a few centuries earlier by Sauron.

Also, the statement that Saruman's cross-breeding was his "wickedest deed" suggests that it was something that had not been done for along time. If Sauron had been using the same "recipe" fairly recently, Saruman's act would seem less shocking.
 
Or Uruk-hai, as it were. But I seem to agree with ShagratU completely here. And I was even going to say that bit about men not becoming larger and more cunning by crossing with Orcs. Honest.
Anyway, now that I am free from the evil clutches of work (and have access again to my preciousss books), I can at last respond to Shagrat's 2 posts to me (way above). I know everybody is dying to hear. Honest.

Firstly, nothing links the Olog-hai to Men.
Well, for a while on this thread that was the case. I just sat here stating that 'hai' was probably 'men', so Olog-hai were troll men. What was my evidence? Well, when Sauron concentrates on them, the Olog-hai can endure the sun. This is a most peculiar distinction among trolls, who generally seem to 'die' in quick fashion when confronted with sunlight. It seems to me that if Sauron concentrates on the other breeds of trolls, they will not be able to endure the sun. Because of this it seems to me that the Olog-hai have non-trollish blood in them, specifically some sort of genetic material which would make them more able to endure sunlight. This does not link Olog-hai to men, but it does not preclude them either. What else distinguishes this breed from other trolls? Well, they are described as 'strong, agile, fierce and cunning, but harder than stone.' Strong and harder than stone seem to be a given for trolls- I can't imagine a weak, soft troll. Fierce might be a characteristic of Trolls, but I tend to think of them as rather slow and ambivalent, rather than fierce. Agile and cunning strike me as decidedly un-trollish. I imagine trolls such as the Huggins', the Cave Troll of Fellowship, and the Mountain Trolls of Pelannor as being rather large and lumbering, not agile. The Hill-Trolls of the Morannon seem to be more beastlike- fierce and striding, but not cunning. They bellow, and roar like beasts. Again, agility and cunning do not link the Olog-hai with men, but men are decidedly sun-enduring, as well as being cunning and agile relative to more 'conventional' Trolls. So I was still insisting that the Olog-hai were troll men when I stumbled on the following passage by happy circumstance:
From RotK, The Battle of the Pelannor Fields. 'East rode the knights of Dol Amroth driving the enemy before them: troll-men and Variags and orcs that hated the sunlight.'
Here at last we appear to have my beloved troll-men, called as such, and clearly operating in the sunlight. Of course, nothing is perfect, and it was not long before Tar-Elenion pointed out the following passage:
From RotK, The Battle of the Pelannor Fields. 'He (the witch king) now was destroyed; but Gothmog the lieutenant of Morgul had flung them into the fray; Easterlings with axes, and Variags of Khand, Southrons in scarlet, and out of Far Harad black men like half-trolls with white eyes and red tongues.'
Well, once we have them as 'men like half-trolls', and once as 'troll-men', which is correct (or are they both correct)? Does the phrase 'like' mean that they are definitively not half-trolls? Throughout his works, Tolkien uses the phrases 'as though', 'as if', and 'like' to either refer to things that 'are', or else to give the reader an glimpse into the meaning of the events described. Witness Sam's account of the encounters between Frodo and Gollum outside the Cracks of Doom and at the Emyn Muil, Legolas' account of the confrontation between Aragorn and Eomer when they first met, or Pippin's accounts of the contests of will between Gandalf and Denethor. Also, there is the point from Minas Tirith where Beregrond and Pippin are disturbed by the sun being obscured 'as though a dark wing had passed across it.' The sun obstructor turns out to be a Nazgul on a fell beast, so it is likely that a dark wing did indeed pass across the sun. Clearly it is not beyond the language of Tolkien to refer to real half-trolls as 'men like half-trolls'. I am not alone in my opinion, apparently. In the index to HoME volume 8, the above creatures are found in the entry for trolls, specifically called 'half-trolls of Far Harad', and they appear in the narrative as "the Variags of Khand, and the black 'half-trolls' of Far Harad." So CT also refers to them as half-trolls, although his usage of the quotes makes this reference somewhat ambiguous.
Turning now back to the Olog-hai, we see in HoME v. 12, p. 80 the passage that Tar-Elenion uses to claim that Trolls can not breed with Orcs. This passage is most interesting because it was the only part of the discussion of Olog-hai which was later changed in the final printing. In the printed version of Appendix F he does not say that Orcs (and biologically equivalent Elves and Men) could not breed with Trolls. That was certainly an early idea of his, but it did not make it into his final draft. We cannot presume to know why Tolkien later omitted this portion of the passage, but there is the distinct possibility that he changed his mind on the subject.
Finally, we note when Tolkien added the reference to Olog-hai. Apparently he did this at the same time as when he added notes covering mumak, Variags, and Khand. These notes would have been in reasonably close proximity- mumak[.I], Variags and Khand appearing at the end of the 'men' section, a single page of Hobbits, (Ents?) followed by Orcs and Trolls. Again this is hardly definitive evidence, but it is definitely interesting to notice that Tolkien decides to mention the Olog-hai at the same time he decides to elucidate the nature of the Variags. As noted in the above two passages from RotK, Variag and troll-men only appear twice each, and they occur together. The fact that Variag was added to the Appendix at the same time as the mysterious Olog-hai makes me inclined to believe that Tolkien was addressing some of the creatures from Pelannor which he decided needed further discussion- the mumakil, the Variags, and the Troll-men. Other people do not need to agree that this was the case (I'm sure they won't), but I certainly do not see how this relationship is impossible. Mannish blood would certainly give the Olog-hai the requisite abilities distinct from other Trolls- agility, cunning, and sun-endurance. The 'trolls they were' passage I read as refuting the possibility that the trolls were just large. Gone is the bit about the Olog-hai not being cross-breeds. In fact, the Appendix makes a point of stating that Sauron 'bred' them, but from unknown stock. Since the stock is so definitively labeled as 'unknown', I think it is presumptious to say that it 'could not be men'. Certainly men are not the only candidates for the extra stock in the Olog-hai, but I would say that it is certainly possible (even likely considering the mention of 'troll-men') that the Olog-hai could have had mannish blood.

I will address the Uruk-hai usage in another post (alas, the limit on post length is ever my enemy)

As for Snaga being a name, the ring being a translator, whether or not the ring does this when held (as opposed to being worn), or whether a proud captain like Shagrat would let an orc in his service address him in Westron (rather than in proper BS) for umpteen years in Mordor; I will leave that to you and Tar-Elenion to hash out. As long as we agree it is possible that there are other ways to make 'uruk' plural, besides adding 'hai', then I won't argue the point. Now that I do have my books handy, p. 436 of Sauron defeated has Adunaic 'pluraling' uruk as (normal) urik and (subjective) urkim. Understandably, this is not Black Speech, but it is a Middle-earth model for how languages might form the plural of uruk (as is Tar-Elenion's now-asterisked '*urukin').

And finally, 'rambling and convoluted contributions' are the norm here. Harad suggests that we all get this thread collected, bound, and published, and of course I agree with him.
 
Why I still think Uruk-hai is separate from Uruk, probably meaning Orc-men (or more properly men-Orcs):

Firstly, I never meant to say that Tolkien was simply calling the Isengarders Orcs by using the Black Speech word 'Uruks'. What I meant is that the Isengarders are certainly descended from Uruks and (slightly) from men. They are a subset of the broader class 'Uruks'. Likewise, the Uruks are a subset of the broader class 'Orcs'. However, not all Orcs are Uruks, and I do not believe that all Uruks are also Uruk-hai. We have Tolkien calling the Isengarders Orcs, uruks, and Uruk-hai. I claim that the last two are different, and are applied to the Isengarders in different senses.

Given the disdain that the Isengarders show for the Whiteskins, it's highly unlikely that they are actually boasting of their Mannish origin!

Well, I hate to try to get into Orcish psychology, especially in the realm of which characteristic of an individual is most deserving of an insult. Grishnakh certainly insults Ugluk often enough (witness Grishnakh's edge in this category in the 'Orc Pentathlete' thread). Does he have to insult him specifically for being part man? It seems that most of Ugluk's problems are with the Rohirrim (Whiteskins), not men in general (he certainly seems to like man-flesh as a delicacy). What little mannish blood Ugluk has is almost certainly not of Rohirric origin, it's probably Dunlendish. How do the Uruk-hai feel about the Dunlendings? Well, they're able to march in the Dundlendings general vicinity without attacking them- that's pretty tolerant by Orc standards.

Now, the $10,000 question: Would Ugluk (and other Isengarders) brag about being mannish when they say that they are Uruk-hai?

The Two Towers, p. 61 "We are the fighting Uruk-hai! We slew the great warrior. We took the prisoners. We are the servants of Saruman the Wise, the White Hand: the Hand that gives us man's-flesh to eat."

I like the layout of this passage: we=fighting Uruk-hai=slayers of the great warrior=takers of prisoners=servants of Saruman. Of course, the passage doesn't have to be read this way. All of the other things they say might be equivalent to 'we' but not to eachother. In particular, though they say 'We are the fighting Uruk-hai' and 'We are the servants of Saruman', it isn't necessarily the case that all Uruk-hai are the servants of Saruman. However, if there were ever an example of Uruk-hai of Mordor, then assuredly Ugluk is addressing him here: silver medalist in the Orc Pentathlon, Grishnakh the Great. Yet Grishnakh says nothing here. Doesn't it seem that Ugluk is boasting about how he is a Uruk-hai and his audience is not? Wouldn't that be an odd usage if Grishnakh was equally a Uruk-hai, and standing right in front of him?
Anyway, what else is Ugluk bragging about here? The slaying of Boromir. What allowed the Uruk-hai to slay Boromir? The 'bows of yew, in length and shape like the bows of Men.' These are the instruments of Boromir's demise since we know he was shot to death, and the Isengarders are claiming to be the shooters. Also, these are amongst the gear that Aragorn claims as being 'not after the manner of Orcs at all!' Indeed, these bows are probably one of the things that sets the Isengarders apart from the Mordor Orcs- the greater stature of the Isengarders allows them to use these longer bows, and here we have the Isengarders bragging about their battle prowess (use of bows) in a way which makes it particular to the Uruk-hai, and which is also particular to having mannish blood. Not defitive proof, but a statement such as it is. A much better statement comes from Helm's Deep:
The Two Towers, p 184 "What of the dawn?" they jeered. 'We are the Uruk-hai: we do not stop the fight for night or day, for fair weather or for storm. .... "
My reading of this is that the Uruk-hai are unaffected by the sun. This is a mannish quality, not posessed by the Uruks of Mordor. They are bragging about being 'part mannish', and equating it to being Uruk-hai. I don't call this definitive proof, but I do call it compelling evidence.
What being a hybrid Orc of Isengard means is that the Orc is larger than a normal Uruk (we agree here, though you seem to be reluctant to give Isengarders much of an advantage), more cunning than a normal Uruk, and capable of tolerating sun to a greater extent than a normal Uruk. These are very braggable qualities, even in the Orc world. And we mustn't forget that human DNA might have the slightest effect on the Orc brain. Isengarders have higher morale, they hang together for the longest during the Rohirrim assault by Eomer, and they almost escape. They have a certain espirit d'corps that other Orcs don't seem to have. I'm sure that the Isengarders are proud of their enhanced abilities, and would brag about them to lesser Orcs. If I were bigger, smarter and more sun-tolerant than fellow Orcs, I certainly would not be so embarrased by the source of these abilities that I would keep them quiet. I do not think it at all unlikely that the Isengarders are in a sense saying 'look at the effects man-blood has had on us, we are the fighting Uruk-hai!' In fact this seems to me to be exactly what they are bragging about. As for other Orcs treating them as 'Orcs', well, Grishnakh calls them the 'muck-rakers of a dirty little wizard.' I'm sure that if the Uruk-hai were not completely dominant in combat, then the other Orcs would have treated them as 'human-filth', and bad-mouthed their breeding, etc. As it was, bad-mouthing the Uruk-hai was probably a death-sentence for the lesser Orcs, and doubtless Ugluk intended to kill Grishnakh for his 'muck-raker' comment before the 'ape of Lugburz' slunk off. The other Orcs definitely did not like the Isengarders, witness:
The Two Towers, p. 59: 'Curse the Isengarders! Ugluk u bagronk sha pushdug Saruman-glob bubhosh skai!'
By this the Orc of course meant : Ugluk to the cesspool, sha! the dungfilth; the great Saruman-fool, skai! Again, I don't pretend to understand Orc insults, but this seemed a dig at the Isengarders and Saruman, and the Orc which made this statement was dead in two short pages. Perhaps this is the sort of reason we don't see more racial slurs coming out of the mouths of the Moria Orcs.
 
aragil--

Nice post. You speak my mind.

I haven't studied this issue... but you've definitely got it the way I've always "read" it.
 
I will leave the 'metaphors' and 'similes' for Shagrat. He has seemed to enjoy that elsewhere.

The usage in the 'narrative' of HoME 8 is CT refering to the rewriting of the overall passage which seems to have reached the form taken in LotR.


Not only was the 'no kinship' portion left out, but this part as well:
"some held that they were a cross between trolls and the larger Orcs".

The reason for the omission from LotR (of both portions) is important. It does not necessarily imply that JRRT changed his mind at the time or rejected it. Much of the info contained in the later drafts of the Appendices presented in PoME were left out of the LotR Appendices because of length and cost, not because of rejection. JRRT had to 'truncate and compress' the Appendices for publication and found that very unsatisfactory.
When 'compressing' this passage for publication he left out the 'crossbreed' supposition and thus there was no need to keep the 'no kinship' statement. This is still implied in the published text by noting that though some held they were 'giant Orcs' they were 'in fashion of body and mind quite unlike even the largest of Orcs', as well as noting that trolls were in origin 'creatures of dull and lumpish nature', which Orcs were not.



Your apparent 'timeframe' seems incorrect.
Variag and Khand were added to the sentence: "Of the speech of the Men of the East and allies of Sauron all that appears is mumak, a name of the great elephant of the Harad." Which was added to the text discussing the origin of Westron in the F4 manuscript (or rather Variag and Khand were added to a carbon). The text about the trolls is part of the original F4 draft. Variag, Khand, and mumak (and discussion of the 'eastern speech' did not make it into App. F (which is unfortunate, but possibly due to 'compression' as well).


The 'trolls they were' passage I read as refuting the possibility that the trolls were just large.

I am not clear on what you are saying here. Please clarify.
I read the 'trolls they were' as just that. They were trolls.

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Originally posted by aragil
The 'trolls they were' passage I read as refuting the possibility that the trolls were just large.

Dangit, this should have read:
'..I read as refuting the possibility that the trolls were just large Orcs.'
Don't know how I missed the end (and point) of my sentence. Anyway, 'Trolls they were' in the passage seems to be rejecting the theory that the Olog-hai were just large Orcs with no Trollish blood. I don't read it as nixing the possibility of a hybrid. We all seem to agree that the Uruk-hai of Saruman had some mannish blood, but for the most part they were referred to in the narrative as 'orcs'. Orcs they were, in spite of the fact that they had a little human blood. I think that the same could hold for the Olog-hai, and of course according to my theory, the Olog-hai would be named similarly to the Uruk-hai because of the shared trait of mannish blood. They would be considered as Trolls and Orcs respectively, but they would have a small amount of mannish blood which would simultaneously distinguish them from 'conventional' Trolls and Orcs and earn them both the epithet '-hai'.

I have recognized that CT's passage from HoME 8 is ambiguous. I just wanted to point out that if you wanted to find the 'half-trolls' in the index, you'd have to look under Trolls. This does not prove that CT thought of them as actual 'trolls', but apparently he thought that this would be where people would look for it in the index.

As for Tolkien changing his mind on the Olog-hai not being half-orcs, I just mentioned that it could have been omitted because he changed his mind, not that he definitely did. I note, however, that the half-breed sentence was fairly short, and if Tolkien had considered the passage crucial to the origin of the Olog-hai, then he could have left it in without seriously lengthening the appendices.

Tar Elenion- I'm unclear to your objection to my last paragraph. As I read it, F4 was a draft. Variag, Khand, and Mumak were added in this version of the draft. We do not see F3, but in F2 the 'troll and orc' section did not mention Olog-hai. It seems to me that CT says that the Olog-hai entry first appears in the F4 draft, which is also when Variag and Khand appear. Is a carbon of a draft considered different than the actual draft? I'm genuinely confused to this objection. All I am trying to say is that Tolkien was thinking about adding Olog-hai while he was also thinking about adding Variag. The Variags are only seen in the narrative with the 'half-trolls' of Far Harad. Maybe Tolkien was thinking about Variags and Olog-hai at the same time because he intended the 'half-trolls' to be the Olog-hai. This is certainly not definitive evidence that the two creatures were the same. I'm justing pointing out that 'half-trolls' and Variags were linked in the narrative, and as I read PoME, the Olog-hai and Variags were added to the appendix at the same time.
 

I will see if I can be clearer. The F4 draft was 'complete'. On the F4 draft he added the sentence about the mumaks. If it had been included in LotR it seems it was to go into the Men section of App. F (end of 4th paragraph). But the draft was already 'complete' including the Troll section. On a carbon of the F4 draft at a later time JRRT put Variag and Khand with Mumak (likely he was recalling that these other 'eastern' words also occurred). These are 'later' than the Troll section and seperated by other sections. What may be confusing you is that CT put them close together in PoME, but this is not an indication that they were written at the same time. I hope this is clearer.
 
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This is slightly clearer, but I am still confused. By F4 being complete, do you mean it was the first version submitted to Haughton-Mifflin, subject only to 'compressing'? Or do you mean that it was completed on it's own, prior to the addition of Variag, and before the beginning of a possible F5 which was submitted to H-M?
I still feel that Variag was added during the same 'drafting' as Olog-hai, whether this was done minutes or months later. F4 (with or without Variags) is different from F3 and the version which was published. I agree that F4a with Olog-hai was earlier than F4b with Olog-hai and Variags, but they still fall into F4- the same basic drafting, taking place at basically the same time.
In the published version, the 'Words of the Easterlings and Dunlendings' is at the end of the 'Languages of Men Section', before the ~1 page note on Hobbits. Following this is a section on Ents, and then we get the Orcs and Trolls (Black Speech) section. I don't know if the Ent and Hobbit sections were extant at the time of F4, so Variags might have been in relative proximity to Olog-hai, although this is less important than the issue of time-disparity between F4a and F4b.
I hope that CT begins publishing photocopies of his father's notes, so that I can glean more and speculate less. It is especially frustrating (for this debate) when he says stuff in HoME v 7, The Uruk-hai, to the effect of: 'The rest of the draft is very similar to what is published.' Of course, it is the exact differences which are most interesting to us for this debate. It appears that CT didn't have us in mind while writing HoME.
 
The Olog-hai


I would agree with this. And with that, I will note that the hill-trolls of Gorgoroth appear in daylight at the Morannon. If, as we agree, other trolls would not be able to endure the sun even with the will of Sauron behind them, then these creatures must be the Olog-hai. At the Morannon, of course, the reek of Orodruin partially obscures the sun ¨C but not completely. We know of course that the first rays of dawn are enough to kill non-Olog-hai trolls.

In this connection, it might be pertinent to note that in the second chapter of LotR Tolkien says:

"Trolls were abroad, no longer dull-witted, but cunning and armed with dreadful weapons."

Appendix F introduces the Olog-hai thus:

¡±But at the end of the Third Age a troll-race not before seen appeared in southern Mirkwood and in the mountain borders of Mordor. ¡°

and goes on to describe them thus:

¡°Trolls they were, but filled with the evil will of their master: a fell race, strong, agile, fierce and cunning, but harder than stone. ¡°

So we have two points of identification between the trolls of ¡°The Shadow of the Past¡± and the Olog-hai; the time of their appearance, and their cunning.

There is also the interesting point that these new trolls were ¡°armed with dreadful weapons.¡± The hill-trolls of Gorgoroth appear to be the only trolls in Tolkien¡¯s work who are described as carrying weapons; the cave troll appears to be unarmed, as are the trolls of ¡°The Hobbit.¡± But the hill-trolls at the Morannon ¡°bore round bucklers huge and black and wielded heavy hammers in their knotted hands.¡± It seems quite clear, therefore, that they are the new, ¡°improved¡± kind of troll. Nothing about these trolls suggests that they have Man-blood.


It seems to me that the description of the Olog-hai generally excludes a ¡°genetic¡± explanation for their sun-resistance:

¡°Unlike the older race of the Twilight they could endure the Sun, so long as the will of Sauron held sway over them.¡±

The sun-endurance is dependent on Sauron¡¯s will, not on genetics. Magic, rather than blood, would appear to be the factor here. Of course, it would also appear that these trolls are not made from stone, that they are not ¡°counterfeits¡± as the Stone Trolls are, but real creatures. But this very point would exclude them from being traditional trolls with Man-blood; traditional trolls aren¡¯t real creatures, and so presumably could not ¡°breed¡± with anything.


Well, we know that the Olog-hai ¡°spoke little, and the only tongue that they knew was the Black Speech of Barad-dur.¡± We shouldn¡¯t be expecting a display of verbal pyrotechnics from them! We see them in a battle, fighting, and they ¡°roar¡± and ¡°bellow¡±. That seems quite appropriate behaviour for a battle, and not indicative of any lack of cunning. As it was probably quite terrifying, it seems the clever thing to do!

The hill-trolls also appear quite agile: they ¡°sprang into the pools¡±, which implies more agility than we would expect from the traditional sort of troll.


I agree there is room for ambiguity as to what these troll-men actually were (though personally I think they were just Men). However, nothing about these creatures indicates that they are to be identified with the Olog-hai.

First, they are described ambiguously. The troll-part is uncertain, while the man-part is not, as they are introduced as men ¡°like half-trolls¡±. This does not fit at all with the unambiguous ¡°Trolls they were¡± in Appendix F.

Secondly, they clearly look like Men, not like ¡°giant Orcs.¡± We know that the Olog-hai were held by some to be giant Orcs, so we would expect them to resemble Orcs in some way. But there is nothing Orcish about the description of these Men. We can reasonably conclude that their proportions are Man-like, not Orc-like.

Thirdly, we are told that the Olog-hai ¡°were in fashion of body and mind quite unlike even the largest of Orc-kind, whom they far surpassed in size and power.¡± Note that the objection is principally one of size. The people of Far Harad are introduced as Men, and we know that the very largest of Orc-kind can be ¡°almost Man-high¡±, which probably indicates a height of 5¡¯ or so. To ¡°far surpass¡± ¡°almost Man-high¡±, I submit that the Olog-hai would have to be greater than Man-size, and thus cannot be creatures that are described as ¡°men¡±. Of course, we are told that the daytime hill-trolls of Gorgoroth are ¡°taller and broader than Men,¡± so they fit where the Far Haradrim do not.

Fourthly, there is a strong geographical objection. The men at Pelennor are from Far Harad. The Olog-hai, we are told, appeared in Mirkwood and Mordor. That pretty much rules out the Far Haradrim as Olog-hai. It might also be worth noting that Sauron was resident in Dol Guldor and then Barad-dur, and so Mirkwood and Mordor appear to be natural areas for his new type of troll to appear. Far Harad appears a bit, well, far.

Finally, a separate objection; Tolkien tells us of the Olog-hai:

¡°That Sauron bred them none doubted, though from what stock was not known.¡±

If ¡°-hai¡± means ¡°men¡±, then it would be perfectly obvious what Olog-hai were bred from; Gandalf, Elrond and the like can understand Black Speech. There would be no mystery. If they were the Men of Far Harad, for instance, it would be quite clear that they were of Man-stock. But it¡¯s not, and so, I submit, they are not.

Originally posted by aragil
And finally, 'rambling and convoluted contributions' are the norm here.

And a good thing too!
 


By 'complete' I mean that F4 was complete within itself (it may well have been in the same essential form as we read App. F1, though with differences in wording and such). There were other typescripts done before sending a final typescript to the printer, but the only difference that CT specifically notes of these is the translation of Grishnakh's curse that appears in one of them, and says these other versions were not all complete. Other differences do not seem to have been remarkable enough to be specially noted.
Yes, F4 was completed on its own prior to the addition of the words 'Variag' and 'Khand' which are added to a carbon copy of the F4 typescript (which was fully extent) and they are associated with the mumak sentence which if it had been in the published version would likely have come at the end of the fourth paragraph on Men.



What you are terming F4a and F4b is just F4. What you are terming F4b is a carbon copy. It was typed up at exactly the same time as what you are terming F4a. At some point after typing F4 the words Variag and Khand were added to the carbon copy.


I hope that CT begins publishing photocopies of his father's notes, so that I can glean more and speculate less.

Not likely, he has pretty much retired.
There are a number of things I wopuld like to see copies especially the 1959 genealogies
 
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