david_wendelken
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That's great! Let us know what it's about when you have time and are in the mood!Well, I finally swallowed all of my nerves and actually started writing my book. I'm so giddy and excited! 🙂
I had a screen play idea that sat fallow for over 20 years because I had a great idea and first paragraph, and couldn't figure out the innards of the story.I don't know how much I can say without spoiling the whole plot honestly.
As I've said before, it is a somewhat apocalyptic world, flavored with necromancy and undead.
I wanted to add elves and dwarves too, bringing it closer to my own favorite genre, High Fantasy. But I couldn't find a way to connect them to my world without getting too far from my plot.
So, instead of elves or dwarves, I have fairies, but not the typical ones. I've changed them to match what I needed and lacked in my world and a way for me to explain the magic. They're a little like a mixture of Tolkien's Valar and elves, being looked upon as deities by men, but they're more humane than men realize.
None of my main characters are fairies so far, but again, I've just started, so it can change at any point.
The scene I'm writing now is the first scene of chapter 1, where my main character meets my supporting female character for the first time.
I'm planning for this to be a trilogy, hopefully, because knowing myself, I can't summarize a plot this big in one book. The place where I'm thinking of being my first cliffhanger is almost a third of the whole plot, but I don't have enough content to fill the gap between the first chapter and this scene. I'm hoping they will come to me when they should.
That definitely sounds like a different take on typical high fantasy, and I'm excited to see where you'll go with it!As I've said before, it is a somewhat apocalyptic world, flavored with necromancy and undead.
Fairies can mean just about anything, so I get what you mean. In some mythology and folklore, they're the cute, pretty, tiny nature spirits. In others, they're trickster spirits or sometimes almost demonic. I would highly recommend reading Tolkien's essay "On Fairy Stories" which is really just about the fantasy genre and mythology as a whole. In it, he describes "Faerie" as not even just a magical creature, but more of that Other Place a fantasy book takes you to. Faerie is a world full of danger, adventure, and magic. It's really quite fascinating.
My advice to you, as someone who has worked on fantasy for the past 13 years, is not to worry too much about whether or not it will be a single book or a trilogy or a series or whatever. I don't even know if my book will be a single book or a trilogy, and I finished my first draft and had beta readers read it and am now editing! A fantasy novel takes a toooooon of time to develop. Like I said, 13 years of work on my book and it's still nowhere near done. Though in all fairness, I scrapped the work entirely in 2017 or 2018 and started over. But I kept my main characters and world. It takes so much time to think about all the things you need to put in a fantasy world. So just focus on developing a little more and writing a little regularly and it will come together eventually.I'm planning for this to be a trilogy, hopefully, because knowing myself, I can't summarize a plot this big in one book. The place where I'm thinking of being my first cliffhanger is almost a third of the whole plot, but I don't have enough content to fill the gap between the first chapter and this scene. I'm hoping they will come to me when they should.
While I have not read this essay, I have my own example of Tolkien's land of Faerie in the story The Smith of Wootton Major(I think that's how it's spelled). That story made my heart ache with such a homesickness it made me weep. Still does every time.I would highly recommend reading Tolkien's essay "On Fairy Stories" which is really just about the fantasy genre and mythology as a whole. In it, he describes "Faerie" as not even just a magical creature, but more of that Other Place a fantasy book takes you to. Faerie is a world full of danger, adventure, and magic. It's really quite fascinating.
| Volume 1, Shadow War in Middle-earth | Lots of progress | 248,000 words |
| Volume 2, House of Finrod in the War of the Ring | Finished | 156,000 words |
| Volume 3, A Long-expected Meeting | Started | 24,000 words |
Don't worry about it. And write.
If it's interesting enough, your readers will read more to learn the full context.
If it's not, it doesn't matter now. What matters now is to write the book, to get the story fully developed and written down.
THEN you go back and re-arrange as needed. That's called structural editing. You fix the stuff you realize is out of order, or missing proper context, etc. THEN you do line editing for grammar and word-smithing.
And unless you're a whiz AND seasoned pro at this, you'll probably have to repeat that editing process a number of times until you're satisfied with it. (And if you're satisfied with it before all that extra editing effort, the odds are you shouldn't be.So get editing advice.)
Keep writing.
Write it wrong. Write it right. Write it interesting. Write it boring. Write it clearly. Write it incomprehensibly. It simply doesn't matter until the editing is done.
Keep writing and then keep editing until it is right.
Hope you find that helpful!
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