Ghorim
A Dwarf
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The wait was long, and the cold cut deep.
Haluin had endured foul chills before: the Mirkwood winters of his childhood, when sudden fronts of snow and ice had rendered the forests as still and eerie as a silent dream. Or the long nights on the open plains of Rohan, where the winds roamed unchecked and sliced through even the thickest of furs.
But even with the great cliff walls to shield them against the pale gusts that blanketed the Ered Luin, the cold up there was something different. It felt permanent. Unchecked by the passing of the seasons, years or ages. Always there. Always hungry.
The Elf shifted his weight back and forth in restless rhythm, acutely aware of the dying daylight as afternoon slipped toward evening. He glanced back to Eldarin, who was pacing deep tracks in the snow. The smith had made it clear that he would not camp in the pass that led to the dwarvish gate, sheltered though it was from the elements. He would not have those sharp and distrusting eyes studying his every move throughout the night. Once nightfall approached, he planned to make a retreat down the mountainside in search of a safe haven amidst the rocks and snow.
Now Haluin turned to Druri, who was doing a little jig to keep himself warm. His dance had a happy bounce to it — he was celebrating a homecoming, oblivious to any challenges that lay ahead. But then there was Jokim. He stood well ahead of the others, closest to the looming gates, in his traditional posture: arms crossed, feet rooted to the ground, head bowed ever so slightly as he stared ahead. He had not turned from the gates since his companions’ conversation had died off an hour before. His beard and mustache had long since gone stiff from the freezing cold, the auburn whiskers now coated white.
Haluin felt that familiar pull to needle the dwarf, to draw him out of his shell and see the world around him. But he had learned long ago that Jokim sometimes preferred living within that fortress of his mind.
So the Elf contented himself to find happiness where he could, taking up a dance alongside Druri. His nimble feet crunched the snow in lively rhythm, and the sound echoed throughout the narrow pass. Druri grinned, sensing the unspoken challenge, and sped up his hopping.
Eldarin’s pacing stopped. Jokim diverted his iron-willed attention from the mountain ramparts. They stared at the two dancers, almost able to hear the music. Even with the wind screaming obscenities overhead, even with the endless mountain cold choking out all other life, there was warmth in their midst — if but for a moment.
But then unseen gears groaned and cranked, ancient stone scraped against earth, and the four travelers fell still. The Eastern Gate swung open once more, and the steel hedgehog formation of soldiers reemerged, Barulin at its head. They moved at a standard march — no great hurry. But before the commander even brought the group to a halt, he was calling for Jokim, beckoning him forward.
Jokim gave a quick look to Haluin, Eldarin and Druri in turn before stumping ahead to meet the Captain of the Gate.
Barulin quickly pulled Jokim aside, designating a lieutenant to mind the formation while he was diverted. The captain led Jokim well away from everyone else, where even the pass’s copious echoes would not divulge the details of their conversation.
Haluin watched the distant conference with a skeptical eye, and leaned in toward Eldarin.
“Another dwarvish haggling match, you suppose?”
“I would suppose,” the smith nodded. “But perhaps you…”
“Hang on!” Druri shoved his way between the two Elves in a huff. “I won’t have two secret talks going on that I can’t hear! Now speak up! What are they saying? Can you hear them?”
“You would have a better chance of deciphering it — were you to stop and listen,” Eldarin said sternly, gesturing to the two distant dwarves.
Even hushed by secrecy, their conversation sounded like the angry rumble of competing storm clouds. Druri fell silent and strained his ears, chasing after each word, each syllable. But he was cut out from this adult world that Jokim and Barulin inhabited, and their words remained a mystery just beyond his fingertips. It infuriated him.
But even if he could not catch the words, he could taste the charge of tension that crackled through the thin mountain air. His uncle’s posture was coiled in the same compact stance that he assumed in spars or battle, and he wielded his Khuzdul like a war hammer: blunt, brutal and heavy. Barulin matched him blow for blow, his voice booming with martial authority.
Suddenly it seemed uncertain that Haluin would ever gain entrance to the mountain colony.
Within a few minutes, Jokim appeared to break off the talks, turning to return to his companions. But Barulin called him back. They exchanged a few more words, and then to the surprise of all the onlookers (this including the dwarvish infantrymen, who were as curious as anyone), the gate captain and Jokim clasped forearms in a show of respect… and disarmament.
Jokim marched back to Druri and the Elves, his gaze clouded and unreadable.
Haluin moved forward to meet him, and Druri was half a step behind.
“No matter the outcome, Jokim…” Haluin began.
The dwarf cut him off. “They still insist that your hands be bound and your eyes covered. But they shall not shackle your feet! I dragged that concession out of them. And I shall be the one to apply your restraints. None of them shall lay a hand on you, save to inspect that my knots are sound.” He nodded to Druri. “The lad and I shall lead you to Vorik’s home, where they will keep you under lock and key for the night. That was the best I could manage.”
There was a pause as the conditions of Haluin’s entrance sunk in. Then Druri clapped his hands in celebration.
“Ha!”
The lad shot a smirking, superior glance over at Barulin and his infantrymen — for in his mind, Jokim had just outdueled them all.
“Jokim…” Haluin gave a short bow. “You have done well by me yet again. Better, in fact, than any reasonable observer might have hoped for.”
“A beggar’s bargain, I call it…” Jokim grumbled a few more choice oaths to himself.
Haluin turned back to Eldarin, who lingered behind and made no attempt to share in even the modest celebration.
“Excuse me.” Haluin retreated with another half-bow and walked back to his kinsman.
“I suppose this is what you wanted?” Eldarin’s voice sounded strangely haughty.
Haluin sighed. “Mellon, none of us would call this predicament ideal. But I act only out of friendship in this case…”
“Out of acquiescence.” Eldarin’s eyes narrowed. “You may consider yourself diminished, but you are yet of the Firstborn, and are unworthy of such shameful handling. How easily you forget.”
“No guest should be treated in this fashion, Firstborn or otherwise. But you have yet to acknowledge Jokim’s end of the bargain. Do you realize that he has now risked his entire reputation among his own folk, just so that I might spend one night at the table as his guest? How am I to scoff at such a gesture?”
“But to be nothing more than a prisoner…”
“You do not have to make this journey, Eldarin. I choose it of my own accord. We shall speak no more of it.” Now Haluin showed a severity to match his companion’s. “I wish you a safe rest and haven for the night. We shall reunite upon the morrow. I would wager on dawn for my return.”
“Hmm, yes.” Eldarin’s front mellowed. “The Naugrim would not keep you a moment longer than was necessary, would they? Well, I shall manage tonight. And then tomorrow we begin.”
There was something grim and foreboding in Eldarin’s tone that gave Haluin pause. But on second thought… these were grim days ahead of them. They would both need that sort of resolve.
“Fare thee well, then. For the now.”
“For the now. Good night.” And with a sharp turn that sent his robe flowing behind him, Eldarin marched off down the pass, snatching his discarded weapons back up as he went. His figure disappeared into shadow and swirling winds.
When Haluin turned back, he saw Jokim standing there, holding bonds and blindfold almost apologetically. Barulin and two of his troops stood just behind.
“If you are ready…” Jokim bowed his head slightly.
Haluin sighed, sparing one last glance to where Eldarin had vanished into the night. “I am ready.”
He knelt in the snow, allowing Jokim to lower the blindfold in place. Darkness fell over him. And for the next hour, there in darkness he would remain.
Haluin had endured foul chills before: the Mirkwood winters of his childhood, when sudden fronts of snow and ice had rendered the forests as still and eerie as a silent dream. Or the long nights on the open plains of Rohan, where the winds roamed unchecked and sliced through even the thickest of furs.
But even with the great cliff walls to shield them against the pale gusts that blanketed the Ered Luin, the cold up there was something different. It felt permanent. Unchecked by the passing of the seasons, years or ages. Always there. Always hungry.
The Elf shifted his weight back and forth in restless rhythm, acutely aware of the dying daylight as afternoon slipped toward evening. He glanced back to Eldarin, who was pacing deep tracks in the snow. The smith had made it clear that he would not camp in the pass that led to the dwarvish gate, sheltered though it was from the elements. He would not have those sharp and distrusting eyes studying his every move throughout the night. Once nightfall approached, he planned to make a retreat down the mountainside in search of a safe haven amidst the rocks and snow.
Now Haluin turned to Druri, who was doing a little jig to keep himself warm. His dance had a happy bounce to it — he was celebrating a homecoming, oblivious to any challenges that lay ahead. But then there was Jokim. He stood well ahead of the others, closest to the looming gates, in his traditional posture: arms crossed, feet rooted to the ground, head bowed ever so slightly as he stared ahead. He had not turned from the gates since his companions’ conversation had died off an hour before. His beard and mustache had long since gone stiff from the freezing cold, the auburn whiskers now coated white.
Haluin felt that familiar pull to needle the dwarf, to draw him out of his shell and see the world around him. But he had learned long ago that Jokim sometimes preferred living within that fortress of his mind.
So the Elf contented himself to find happiness where he could, taking up a dance alongside Druri. His nimble feet crunched the snow in lively rhythm, and the sound echoed throughout the narrow pass. Druri grinned, sensing the unspoken challenge, and sped up his hopping.
Eldarin’s pacing stopped. Jokim diverted his iron-willed attention from the mountain ramparts. They stared at the two dancers, almost able to hear the music. Even with the wind screaming obscenities overhead, even with the endless mountain cold choking out all other life, there was warmth in their midst — if but for a moment.
But then unseen gears groaned and cranked, ancient stone scraped against earth, and the four travelers fell still. The Eastern Gate swung open once more, and the steel hedgehog formation of soldiers reemerged, Barulin at its head. They moved at a standard march — no great hurry. But before the commander even brought the group to a halt, he was calling for Jokim, beckoning him forward.
Jokim gave a quick look to Haluin, Eldarin and Druri in turn before stumping ahead to meet the Captain of the Gate.
Barulin quickly pulled Jokim aside, designating a lieutenant to mind the formation while he was diverted. The captain led Jokim well away from everyone else, where even the pass’s copious echoes would not divulge the details of their conversation.
Haluin watched the distant conference with a skeptical eye, and leaned in toward Eldarin.
“Another dwarvish haggling match, you suppose?”
“I would suppose,” the smith nodded. “But perhaps you…”
“Hang on!” Druri shoved his way between the two Elves in a huff. “I won’t have two secret talks going on that I can’t hear! Now speak up! What are they saying? Can you hear them?”
“You would have a better chance of deciphering it — were you to stop and listen,” Eldarin said sternly, gesturing to the two distant dwarves.
Even hushed by secrecy, their conversation sounded like the angry rumble of competing storm clouds. Druri fell silent and strained his ears, chasing after each word, each syllable. But he was cut out from this adult world that Jokim and Barulin inhabited, and their words remained a mystery just beyond his fingertips. It infuriated him.
But even if he could not catch the words, he could taste the charge of tension that crackled through the thin mountain air. His uncle’s posture was coiled in the same compact stance that he assumed in spars or battle, and he wielded his Khuzdul like a war hammer: blunt, brutal and heavy. Barulin matched him blow for blow, his voice booming with martial authority.
Suddenly it seemed uncertain that Haluin would ever gain entrance to the mountain colony.
Within a few minutes, Jokim appeared to break off the talks, turning to return to his companions. But Barulin called him back. They exchanged a few more words, and then to the surprise of all the onlookers (this including the dwarvish infantrymen, who were as curious as anyone), the gate captain and Jokim clasped forearms in a show of respect… and disarmament.
Jokim marched back to Druri and the Elves, his gaze clouded and unreadable.
Haluin moved forward to meet him, and Druri was half a step behind.
“No matter the outcome, Jokim…” Haluin began.
The dwarf cut him off. “They still insist that your hands be bound and your eyes covered. But they shall not shackle your feet! I dragged that concession out of them. And I shall be the one to apply your restraints. None of them shall lay a hand on you, save to inspect that my knots are sound.” He nodded to Druri. “The lad and I shall lead you to Vorik’s home, where they will keep you under lock and key for the night. That was the best I could manage.”
There was a pause as the conditions of Haluin’s entrance sunk in. Then Druri clapped his hands in celebration.
“Ha!”
The lad shot a smirking, superior glance over at Barulin and his infantrymen — for in his mind, Jokim had just outdueled them all.
“Jokim…” Haluin gave a short bow. “You have done well by me yet again. Better, in fact, than any reasonable observer might have hoped for.”
“A beggar’s bargain, I call it…” Jokim grumbled a few more choice oaths to himself.
Haluin turned back to Eldarin, who lingered behind and made no attempt to share in even the modest celebration.
“Excuse me.” Haluin retreated with another half-bow and walked back to his kinsman.
“I suppose this is what you wanted?” Eldarin’s voice sounded strangely haughty.
Haluin sighed. “Mellon, none of us would call this predicament ideal. But I act only out of friendship in this case…”
“Out of acquiescence.” Eldarin’s eyes narrowed. “You may consider yourself diminished, but you are yet of the Firstborn, and are unworthy of such shameful handling. How easily you forget.”
“No guest should be treated in this fashion, Firstborn or otherwise. But you have yet to acknowledge Jokim’s end of the bargain. Do you realize that he has now risked his entire reputation among his own folk, just so that I might spend one night at the table as his guest? How am I to scoff at such a gesture?”
“But to be nothing more than a prisoner…”
“You do not have to make this journey, Eldarin. I choose it of my own accord. We shall speak no more of it.” Now Haluin showed a severity to match his companion’s. “I wish you a safe rest and haven for the night. We shall reunite upon the morrow. I would wager on dawn for my return.”
“Hmm, yes.” Eldarin’s front mellowed. “The Naugrim would not keep you a moment longer than was necessary, would they? Well, I shall manage tonight. And then tomorrow we begin.”
There was something grim and foreboding in Eldarin’s tone that gave Haluin pause. But on second thought… these were grim days ahead of them. They would both need that sort of resolve.
“Fare thee well, then. For the now.”
“For the now. Good night.” And with a sharp turn that sent his robe flowing behind him, Eldarin marched off down the pass, snatching his discarded weapons back up as he went. His figure disappeared into shadow and swirling winds.
When Haluin turned back, he saw Jokim standing there, holding bonds and blindfold almost apologetically. Barulin and two of his troops stood just behind.
“If you are ready…” Jokim bowed his head slightly.
Haluin sighed, sparing one last glance to where Eldarin had vanished into the night. “I am ready.”
He knelt in the snow, allowing Jokim to lower the blindfold in place. Darkness fell over him. And for the next hour, there in darkness he would remain.


