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🧙Gandalf's Death in Moria - An Afterthought?

One should look at all the relevant passages in in letter 156 following the passage that Walter orginally cited in this thread: This partly answers some of the questions raised in this thread.

As to Tolkien admitting that Gandalf’s death was somewhat a cheat, I think possibly Tolkien might have been looking at it in either or both of two ways.

First, it was and is a common trope in adventure ficture for a person to be killed apparently, and then turn out later to be alive, the person’s survival often being weakly explained. (Does anyone recall a recent film in which a hero was knocked over a cliff but roused by the kisses from his horse?)

It seems from the citation provided by Aragil that Tolkien originally did intend such normal, common, hackneyed adventure melodrama. But, Gandalf, after is not really a mortal, though one doesn’t know when Tolkien actually decided what Gandalf was.

But having decided that Gandalf was a Maia from the West, embodied in flesh, a new embodiment would not be the same stretch that it would be if a mortal were returned to bodily form. Why not have Gandalf actually slain and then brought back stronger?

As it comes out in the tale however, the feeling is still not that far from the original normal hackneyed authorial deception that Tolkien had originally planned. The rules of Tolkien’s world may explain how Gandalf could be brought back, but the reader doesn’t know those rules.

What would have improved the situation would have been a setup of some kind before Gandalf’s death to give the reader a hint about Gandalf’s true stature, e.g. a few words about how embodied spirits like Sauron cannot quite be killed in the same sense that mortal are killed and somewhere else some speculation about Gandalf s origin in which someone suggests he is an embodied spirit.

The reader ought to have been given more clues.

Also, the return of Gandalf is somewhat deus ex machina, a term meaning ‘god from the machine’ referring to Greek tragedies, not the best Greek tragedies, where a god descends from heaven (actually lowered from above by some kind of crane machine) and ties up the plot. This also feels like cheating.

Gandalf of course doesn’t tie up the ends by himself and is still far from being an omnipotent god.

I am also not entirely sure that Tolkien’s explanations here are totally adequate. If those Ainur entered Eä were bound to it until the End, then why and how does Gandalf’s spirit leave the world? Why would it simply not return to the West?

Of course one can invent the explanation that Eru simply took Gandalf’s spirit as one of the various exceptions that Tolkien believes are found to most rules. But that explanation seems a bit of a cheat also.
 
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