Quote by ShagratU
It's interesting that no other Orc ever addresses or describes the Uruk-hai of Isengard as "the Uruk-hai" in the chapter of that name.
We get "Curse the Isengarders!", but we don't get "Curse the Uruk-hai!". Along with the fact that "Uruk-hai" is always qualified by "fighting" or "of Isengard" when the Isengarders address the other Orcs, this is highly suggestive.
From the point of view of the Hobbit narrators of LotR, "Snaga" is the character's name. It's an appellation that is used to identify the character; Shagrat calls him it and he answers to it. It's thus perfectly understandable that Christopher Tolkien calls treats "Snaga" as his name. It clearly is his name in the context of the story as seen by Sam, and it's what the Uruk Shagrat calls him, just as the scout in Rohan is named "Snaga" by the hobbit narrator. The Appendix suggests that it wasn't the personal name of either, however.
The distinction that you draw between the two "Snagas" is very odd. What in the text supports it?
Both Ugluk and Shagrat address lesser Orcs as "Snaga." In each case, the hobbit narrator of the Red Book of Westermarch presents it as a personal name - as it must have seemed to the hobbit witnesses. However, in the Appendix, the "omniscient" authorial voice tells us that the Uruk-hai generally used the term "snaga" to describe lesser sorts of Orc. The identical usages by Shagrat and Ugluk suggests that they are both members of the "Uruk-hai."
In an earlier exchange with Tar-Elenion I gave quotes from CT showing that he says he has at times changed his father's writing to eliminate inconsistencies (this is before the HoME series), even in one case saying how a change he made brought his father's writing in line with Foster.
Go back and read the thread. It's there.
In The Simarillion CT attempted to resolve the inconsistency by changing his father's manuscript before publication. He later decided that his change was not the best way to resolve the inconsistency and was now, in UT, offering yet another alternative to resolve the inconsistency. All of this demonstrates twwo things. One, the dangers of secondary sources and trying to rely on them -- now neither The Silamrillion not UT agree with LOTR. Two, CT admits to changing his fathers words when he sees fit (he did it in The Sil).
[emphasis added]I don't think you are in the least likely permanently to decline upon the worse; and I should say that you need a little thickening of the outer skin, if only as a protection for the more sensitive interior; and if you acquire it, it will be of permanent value in any walk of later life in this tough world (which shows no signs of softening). And of course, as you already discover, one of the discoveries of the process is the realization of the values that often lurk under dreadful appearances. Urukhai is only a figure of speech. There are no genuine Uruks, that is folk made bad by the intention of their maker; and not many who are so corrupted as to be irredeemable (though I fear it must be admitted that there are human creatures that seem irredeemable short of a special miracle, and that there are probably abnormally many of such creatures in Deutschland and Nippon - but certainly these unhappy countries have no monopoly: I have met them, or thought so, in England's green and pleasant land).
Originally posted by aragil
If any of these things did not apply to the Uruk-hai in general, and Grishnakh really was a Uruk-hai, then wouldn't he have objected to this usage?
Originally posted by aragil
It's also curious that 'fighting' is considered a qualifier for Uruk-hai. If the only Uruk-hai are that of isengard, then all Uruk-hai are 'fighting Uruk-hai' because both Ugluk's statement and those of the Uruk-hai at Helm's Deep (the only self-labeled Uruk-hai in the books) identify themselves as fighting. If Uruk-hai includes the Uruks of Mordor, then it seems odd that some of them don't fight. What does Appendix F say? That the word uruk was applied to the soldier Orcs of Mordor and Isengard. Do some of these Soldier Orcs hold down desk jobs, so that they do not fight? Are there older Uruk-hai, who are making a living off the Mordor Pension Plan so that they no longer have to fight? Is this why fighting is a qualifier? From what I have read the word fighting would not serve as a qualifier for either the Uruks or the Uruk-hai, as both breeds (if they are different breeds) are clearly bred for fighiting (i. e. to be soldiers).
Originally posted by Harad
Without getting into anything deeper:
If you asked a Notre Dame footballer, he would call himself one of the "Fighting Irish." This is a badge of honor, however he would also answer to the name of "The Irish." Obviously the Uruk-Hai esprit de corps is quite high, and they are very much in the National Championship hunt, at least in their own pea brains.
Originally posted by aragil
First off, I'd like to apologize for posting several times in succession. However, as I have not posted on this thread for some time I think it is only my right.
Originally posted by aragil
The word Nazgul immediately pops to mind. This is as much a name as Uruk-hai, and I think it is ridiculous to try and make an exception of it along the lines of: 'The characters can refer to the Nazgul in the Black Speech because there are only 9 Nazgul, but they could not refer to the Uruk-hai as such because there are more than 9 Uruk-hai'.
Originally posted by aragil
In fact, Nazgul is so commonly used that it is worth investigating. First off, we see that there is an anglicization for Nazgul- Ringwraiths.
Originally posted by aragil
In fact, they each get their own separate index entry, which I would say is in direct opposition to CT's entry in UT.
Originally posted by aragil
Looking at an equivalent introduction in Appendix A, the stewards, we find that the race of uruks first appear out of Mordor in TA 2475, during the reign of Denethor I. Why would Tolkien give us a BS name and equivalent anglicization for Nazgul, yet neglect to say that Uruks is but an Anglicization for Uruk-hai?
Originally posted by aragil
Well, there you have it. The Uruks had been around for 544 years by the time Gandalf spots them in Moria. In those 544 years they have had probable military engagements with Gondor, Rohan, the Dwarves, the Dunedain, the Elves of Rivendell, the Elves of Mirkwood, and even the Hobbits. All of the Free-Peoples from the Lord of the Rings have had contact with them in war-time. If the Uruks were the same as the Uruk-hai, then we could assume that they proudly boasted to be Uruk-hai like the Orcs of Helm's Deep. This would mean that the Westron Speakers of Middle Earth would have become quite familiar with the term Uruk-hai by TA 3018, and would be as likely to say 'Uruk-hai' as they were to say 'Nazgul'. Yet the Westron speakers seem decidedly unfamiliar with the term Uruk-hai and exceedingly familiar with the term Uruks. I would say that this is evidence that the Uruks were not the same as the Uruk-hai, a name which only appears in the index/narrative during the year 3019, 544 years after the advent of the Uruk.
Greenwood, you seem to have asserted that CT says he changed his fathers writings to bring them in line with Foster. When I asked for the citation and quote to back your assertion up, you seemed reluctant to provide it. The above post from 01-26-02 is the only post I have found that seems to be what you were speaking of. It did not provide any quote from CT saying he changed his fathers writings to bring them in line with Foster.
Quoted by ShagratU
One point that has been hardly raised in this debate, but which, I feel, is extremely important, is the simple fact that "Uruk-hai" is Black Speech.
Originally posted by Greenwood
I marvel at the way you keep switching your arguments back and forth as to who the narrator is to suit your argument in each case.
Originally posted by Greenwood
The narrator/author is JRR Tolkien and he has chosen to call the orc in Cirith Ungol by the name of Snaga in at least four instances: "growled Snaga", "Shagrat hunted Snaga", a second "growled Snaga", and "Snaga thrust the ladder". There is no evidence that JRRT was such an incompetent storyteller, or so liked to confuse his readers (evidently including his son), that he did not mean Snaga to be the name of this particular orc.
Originally posted by Greenwood
The distinction is based on what is evidently one of your favorite passages in LOTR, my example 12 from Appendix F which says that the Uruk-hai use the word snaga to mean slave. Ugluk is indisputedably Uruk-hai. The word snaga is not used the same way in the Uruk-hai chapter as it is in the Cirith Ungol chapter. It is clearly an orc's name in Cirith Ungol and based on Appendix F it is a form of address when used by Ugluk.
Originally posted by Greenwood
Further evidence that Shagrat is not a Uruk-hai, but in fact one of the Uruks, as Gorbag calls him.
Originally posted by Greenwood
I suggest you try rereading this thread.
Originally posted by aragil
I think that it would be useful in this discussion to look chronologically at where Tolkien begins to use our two favorite terms, 'Uruks' and 'Uruk-hai'.
You have provided a great deal of interesting information here. Many thanks!
Originally posted by aragil
If for instance, JRRT had told CT that he planned for the Uruk-hai of Isengard to be humans that Saruman had ruined in crossbreeding with Orcs, it would be fair for him to write on 12 August 1944 "There are no genuine Uruks, that is folk made bad by the intention of their maker". This would apply only to the troops of Saruman, as he had made folk (human-folk) bad intentionally by crossing them with Orcs.
One problem with this point is that Tolkien does not appear to have finally decided that the Uruk-hai did have Man-blood until long after the completion of LotR. In a post-LotR letter, as Tar-Elenion has pointed out, he is still talking about the "possible special breeding of orcs."
Originally posted by aragil
It could not apply to Mordor Orcs, as he had not yet given a name to them (as we shall see), nor were the later uruks of Mordor made to be any more 'bad' than the original Orc-stock they came from.
Of course, the Uruks term is subsequently applied to both Isengarders and Mordor-orcs. Also, all uruks (being orcs) are inherently "people made bad".
Originally posted by aragil
The term 'uruks' he uses in the letters can safely be assumed to be an anglicization made up on the spot, as it has not appeared anywhere in the narrative up to this point, nor will it appear again for several years.
This is interesting as speculation about the genesis of the term "Uruks"; however, its final retention and use is surely the important thing.
Originally posted by aragil
In fact, it has demonstrably changed, as the letter used both Uruk-hai and uruks in reference to Saruman's troops. The one million dollar question is: did Tolkien intend that both Saruman's and Sauron's Orcs were uruks (expanded definition of uruks), or that now it was Sauron's Orcs who were uruks while Saruman's troops retained the older label of Uruk-hai (changed definition of uruks)?
Well, it's a fairly easy one million dollars!We have the evidence of Appendix A, Appendix F and UT to demonstrate that Tolkien applied "uruk", "uruks" and "Uruks" to Saruman's great soldier-orcs in the final form of LotR and afterwards.
That's an interesting passage. However, it's well worth noting that "orcs" may be entirely synomous with "goblins" in that passage. If one substitutes, say, "Men" and "humans", for the two terms (or vice-versa), the passage would still make sense (although the description of running stooped would be inappropriate of course!). If we reverse the usage, we get:
'"A bit low for orcs, at least for the big ones," thought Bilbo, not knowing that even the big ones, the goblins of the mountains, go along at a great speed stooping low with their hands almost on the ground.'
The point is that if one reads the terms as synonyms (which they certainly were in Tolkien's final conception), the sentence works perfectly well. The point may be that the big ones come from the mountains, rather than the big ones being called "orcs". It is quite possible that Tolkien inserted the term later simply to get "orc" used more in the text, thus easing the transition from the first book to the second.
In this regard, it's interesting to note that "orc" and "goblin" certainly were synonyms even in the first version of "The Hobbit", where "Orcrist" translates as "Goblin-cleaver."
Also, the introduction - which I believe dates to the earliest edition, though I may be wrong - states that "goblin" is a translation for "orc". I'm going on memory here, but I believe that Tolkien says that "orc" is only used once in the introduction, while in the revised version it occurs twice (the additional use of the term being the one you have mentioned above).
The original use of "orc" is in Gandalf's description of the slopes of the Grey Mountains being "stiff with goblins, hobgoblins and orcs of the worst description". Given the statement in the introduction that "goblin" and "orc" are synonymous terms, this at first appears a little odd. However, in the context of a children's story, I think it's probably just use of a literary technique often used in children's stories, where synomyous terms (or near synonyms) are listed for effect. (There is probably a name for this technique, which was widely used by classical authors, but if I once knew it, I have forgotten it.) An example would be saying,"brigands, footpads and bandits." "Brigands" and "bandits" are exact synonyms, with "footpads" hear analogous to "hobgoblins" as a subset. The technique simply adds colour to a descriptive passage. Tolkien would certainly have been aware of its use by classical writers.
Originally posted by aragil
The common thread in these four passages is that the larger creatures have arms reaching almost to the ground.
I would draw a slight distinction here. Grishnakh's arms reach to the ground when he is standing. His followers are like him, with "long arms". Shagrat and the "orcs of the mountains" have long arms that hang close to the ground when they run (stooped over). My inference would be that Grishnakh is an orc of unusually exaggerated appearance.
It's also worth noting that the Isengarders have long arms too, and also run with bowed backs. There are two descriptions of the Isengarders having long arms; one in "The Uruk-hai" and one at "Helm's Deep". The appearance of different sorts of uruk may not be terribly different; what appears to distinguish the Isengarders more than anything else is their resistance to the sun, and their unusual equipment.
Originally posted by aragil
It is beyond coincidence that Tolkien would use this same phrase four times to apply to four un-related Orcs.
But if one takes all the mentions of long-armed orcs in LotR, we have to add in two descriptions of the Isengarders. Long arms and a hunched running style appear to be generic orcish traits.
Quote by ShagratU
Far from being an incompetent storyteller, Tolkien adds depth to his story through linguistic details such as the use of "Snaga." Snaga is the name of the small Orc in "The Tower of Cirith Ungol", just as it is the name of the Orc scout in "The Uruk-hai." Both names are capitalized, and treated by the hobbit narrators as proper names.
Appendix F adds depth to the story by explaining that "Snaga" is not in fact just a popular prenom amongst Orcs, but actually the Black Speech term for "slave", "snaga".
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