Server Room Gremlin
a.k.a. Curufin the Crafty
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Our writing has an 'immediate cadence' - how it rises and falls within a single sentence - its consonants and vowels creating either a smoothness or a friction. A hard consonant misplaced can ruin the flow and jar the reader. It also carries a contextual rhythm - a 'fit' into the larger paragraph, section, or even chapter. If our writing conflicts in the wrong places and wrong ways, we can confuse - even lose - our audience. The music of the language in the larger sense can create forward pacing, momentum, or reflection. It can also kill.
Somehow, I think I knew this without 'knowing' it. As in, I found it hard to describe why it often takes me a lot of time and effort to write a story in prose that I'm satisfied with. But I did know that how I wrote something was important, not just what I was writing. It helps to create the picture of the scene and the action in the reader's mind. Actions that are speedy/quick should take a short time to read, and moments where you want the reader to slow down, breathe, and think about what you're saying should take longer to read.Our writing has both an 'architecture' and a music. We lose a massive part of our impact, if we are not aware of and productive in both.
Mind you, I don't always have a pattern in my head I'm trying to follow. It varies based on the particular piece of writing: some stories want to have more of that poetic flow, and others do not. It takes more time and effort to write like this, and sometimes I want to have an easier time of writing. 😂My word choices for each sentence were very careful, as I was also trying to match a certain rhythm of syllables in my mind, which is not constant, but varies with the action or picture I'm trying to convey.
Question for the Writers:
Would it be helpful to anyone if I put together a wee bit of a 'history of poetry' including timelines, overlaps, etc. as it progressed from its early forms, through what is called 'traditional,' and into the later forms?
Could also marry it with a few of the names of poets 'leading the way' or 'predominant' in the changes and adoptions?
There are, of course, books on all this, but well... sometimes briefer summaries can be of assistance. Thought I'd ask.
Unless that summary is what you want to write about more than anything else.
Indeed. But far be it from Ent to say it so hastily.it's what you want to write more than anything else at the moment.
Still on it's way. 13 pages of notes carved out worthy of consideration for inclusion. Now for the structuring molds, pruning shears, and refining fires.I'll put a basic 'poetic history' together for the interested, and have it here 'soon.'
Has arrived. (.pdf attached - just 2 pages.)on it's way.
Just for giggles, I'll add this little 'extra'.There's a ton I've not included.
The candlelight flutters in this pocket-sized room. A desk, a chair, a candle, paper and pen, a locket — and me. With these, I must spin a web of love to kill a man.
Ok, I figured out the fix. Simple, once it came to me. Whew!!!Just found a plot hole about the size of Patton's Third Army racing thru France in 1944...
Hmmm...
Remarkable! Praise the Lord, for that was a mercy!Ok, I figured out the fix. Simple, once it came to me. Whew!!!
So, I got on a writing spurt last night and popped out a bunch of words (most of which I'm pleased with). But so many that the chapter got too long, so I split it into two chapters. Now I have a chapter to write instead of half a chapter! Progress!Halfway throught the last chapter to write in Volume 1. So close to first draft status!
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