There is something of a stylistic difference between
The Children of Hurin and the
novels Tolkien completed in his life, but it still felt true to the spirit of
Middle-earth. I have no idea if those differences were a result of Chris interpolating his father's drafts into a whole, if Tolkien simply wrote differently later in his life, or if he would have revised it stylistically when his notes were completed.
I think there are large enough sections to attribute the style to JRRT. We know that the latter part of the Narn, from the section headed "The Return of
Turin to Dor-Lomin" to "The Death of Turin" was written circa
1951 (
thus before The Lord of the Rings was published), and according to Christopher Tolkien (
here referring to the Unfinished Tales version) "has undergone only marginal editorial alteration."
And the part of the Narn dealing with Turin's earlier life is a work of the
later 1950s. It includes
a twelve-page typescript composed ab initio, for example, and a section [to the end of Turin in Doriath]
"required a good deal of revision and selection, and in some cases some slight compression, the original texts being scrappy and disconnected."
But for its central section
[Turin among the outlaws, Mim, the land of Dor-Cuarthol, the death of Beleg, and Turin's life in Nargothrond] the Narn is at its least finished,
"and in places diminishes to outlines of possible turns in the story."
This is a very simplified summary however, even with respect to the
Unfinished Tales version
(the later version for the book The Children of Hurin has more to say about the construction of that version).
(. . .) I am glad he did it. I certainly prefer that outcome to sifting through piles of notes myself and trying to haggle a narrative out of it (as often is the case reading The History of Middle-earth).
I enjoy that haggle, but the reading of the constructed
Children of Hurin is indeed a different experience, and well worth it. I had to have the signed version, although no one was selling that
for five dollars. Or five anything!
By the way,
thanks for helping me find my driver's license (missing for about three weeks). I wanted to check something about the Narn from Hammond and Scull's Companion, and found that I'd used my license as a bookmark -- I had a vague memory that I'd done that, in some book, but wasn't really sure!
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