First segment:
Celebrimbor is now his own person in all but renouncement. He and his father do not talk anymore, and hardly anything is left of
Curufin's old loves. Even his smithwork has failed him. The Oath returns to claw at his mind.
It is a desperately sad time for the
sons of Fëanor, but what can they do? They will do anything to be rid of the darkness within themselves. And Celebrimbor will watch in horror and will not understand.
Segment 2: Oi,
Celegorm has the tone of a prophet foretelling doom! His quote of the Oath(for so it looked) would have left shivers throughout the hall, I think.
Oh, Curufin. The irony of declaiming
Finrod's Oath as futile, though he took it in love instead of in hate. And though there was little moulding of hearts in his words, yet Curufin managed to bring to blaze what spark his brother set, and now all
Nargothrond will not go....what will your son think of this, smithlord?
And now it only remains for them to crush any resistance
Orodreth may bring.
Segment 3:
Lúthien, fair Lúthien. At this moment I could not help but remember she is dressed entirely in her own hair, woven into a dress though it is. I wonder what the brothers thought of that XD
And the brothers' response to this fair maid's request? Celegorm is filled with desire, though he sees the strategical advantage her presence poses to himself and his brother.
Curufin...feels his wife's loss. Feels it buried too deeply to really get at anymore, for he is one who buries what griefs he cannot solve. If they will let him, that is.
Their plan, good heavens! Half madness, for they do not count at all on Lúthien or what she may do to stop them. How much of their minds has the Oath consumed at this point?
Celebrimbor is reaching the end of his tether with his father. Or at least the end is in sight. Curufin's ways have wrought such sorrow upon Nargothrond, and now the people work and act almost mechanical, as Curufin would have them act. For he needs machines, not people.
What agony is there in betrayal? From strangers, from friends, and worst from family long loved and cherished.
Huan has taken his choice, though we do not yet know why. The workings of his mind have set a fate upon all
Beleriand.
Segment 4: Ah yes, the disembodied coolness of mere observation. I've felt that one before! Strange, how Curufin noted the people were still able to be swayed to the side of him and Celegorm, but he spoke not a word, and then accepted the fate imposed by Orodreth's promise and Celegorm's defeated defiance.
Slowly, Curufin is left all alone on his side. His captain chooses the certainty of a king he can follow and love over the steel-minded lord he has been faithful to all this while, and his son sees further behind the mask of Curufin's words than anyone else...yet still cannot reach what his father once was. And Curufin departs, at least taking leave of his son with love...but with a bitter, wounded love. For now he feels abandoned in truth, though he will not acknowledge it to himself. He will cling the more tightly to Celegorm after this.
The mighty leap of
Beren! So much happened all in a few moments. I can only imagine how badly the shame stung Curufin's soul, being not only half-killed(by a mortal) but disarmed and unarmored. And Huan turns on Celegorm again, his fealty sworn to Lúthien over his lifelong master. That pain must burn Celegorm's world inside his head.
And Beren experiences near-death yet again! I do not know how many times he has been brought almost to the point of expiring by now, but it is many. I wonder Huan could not catch that second
arrow, but perhaps he was still disposing of the first. Now Curufin feels...not avenged, but barely touched with bitter satisfaction, perhaps. At this point, nothing but fulfilment of the Oath will bring any semblance of peace to his tortured mind.
He has even lost his
horse.
I must stop for now. It has taken me an hour to read and comment this far! I look forward to the rest another time. Your words are well-put together, Gremlin. I have enjoyed them.